RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
white-ice 5 55.56%
streetsweepa 4 44.44%
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 04-15-04, 12:18 PM   #1
streetsweepa
Banned: Cheating
 
streetsweepa's Avatar
 
From: detroit
streetsweepa vrs. white-ice

IP: AAF4 20CB

12 line max
no d/r
no crew votes
u spit first

streetsweepa = $$$tim$$$. Both DQ'ed and banned for cheating
-Cprogress
Send a message via AIM to streetsweepa  
Old 04-15-04, 12:28 PM   #2
streetsweepa
Banned: Cheating
 
streetsweepa's Avatar
 
From: detroit
IP: AAF4 20CB

come on man we gonna battle or what? u called me out lets do this
Send a message via AIM to streetsweepa  
Old 04-15-04, 12:30 PM   #3
white-ice
Banned
 
From: leeds,england
spit shit

IP: 3354 DAC6

listen as i spit,coz wen i spit i cum raw/leave ur ass thinkin wot the fucks gone on yah?

u think uz a jay-z/but without the pay G/
ur rapstyles la-zy/itd b quicker 2 page me/

see i can bust a rhyme ,in twice quick tha time
so read between my lines, n u 2 my start 2 shine!

but thats impossible/coz im 2 philosophical/

but dnt let that stop u..hve a go/
ur not the only one ive cum across whos jst an average joe.

u see theres wit in wot i spit/n u 2z gona b gone like king kong,thinking u can stay up here...but ur wrong!!
 
Old 04-15-04, 12:49 PM   #4
streetsweepa
Banned: Cheating
 
streetsweepa's Avatar
 
From: detroit
IP: AAF4 20CB

come on nigga u cant spit ur structure is weak//
ur punches dont connect, and my shit is elite//
u call ur self white ice//
what the fuck kinda name is ICE?? atleast try to improvise!//
u call me the average joe//
nigga u the one that rymes like a hoe//
yea ur name is right, your whole rymescheme is frozen cold//
yea and ur rhymes old and week it might fold//
where did u steal all theme rymes from a book?//
thats called plagerism u fuckin crook//
you might say your philosophical, ur punches are weak//
see this fucking win against u will be bitter sweet//
i didnt even have to try hard, cuz u brought the ice but i brought the HEAT//
Send a message via AIM to streetsweepa  
Old 04-15-04, 01:17 PM   #5
Shadows edge
retired.
 
Shadows edge's Avatar
 
From: Urbana
IP: 75F5 BDD1

both of you need to elevate. white: can't call yourself philosophical, either your rhymes use metaphores, and are deep, use wordplay, etc or they don't. yours dont, so its not philosophical. any sentence that reads "2 philosophical" is just a joke. also, your structure is beyond fucked up.

street: aight, you also gotta work on your structure, put some multis in there to work on the flow, work on your punches, cuz urs are a little played. at least you brought some personalls.

v/ street

vote on Shadow v franchiZe
__________________
RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!
 
Old 04-15-04, 02:18 PM   #6
$$$tim$$$
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: AAF4 20CB

yo this battle was tight ...street was rhymein aight at forst than gradually got betta...whit ice u need to work alot man im tellin you..also white..u need to stop talkin bout cum and shit u crazy ass WHITE BRITISH BASTARD!!!!!!
BEST LINE : come on nigga u cant spit ur structure is weak//
ur punches dont connect, and my shit is elite//

VOTE GOES TO STREETSWEEPA
 
Old 04-15-04, 02:43 PM   #7
white-ice
Banned
 
From: leeds,england
IP: 3354 DAC6

thanx 4 the vote but dnt tek the piss you fukin yank.if ur so hot spit sum shit,n ill rip u 2 fukin bits.prick
 
Old 04-15-04, 03:02 PM   #8
$$$tim$$$
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: AAF4 20CB

u gonna rip me to bits huh
lets do thiss bitch and we'll see whos been ripped
 
Old 04-15-04, 03:03 PM   #9
$$$tim$$$
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: AAF4 20CB

lets go ill set this shit up right now

scared lil bitch
 
Old 04-15-04, 04:27 PM   #10
Mixxed MC
Banned: Cheating
 
Mixxed MC's Avatar
 
From: BruNzwiK
IP: 6E82 8AF8

yo i thought it was all good but see the structure wassint right the shit i chouldint keep it goin n flowin it was like 1 rhyme then to many lines for the next rhyme well i kno my vote im stickin wittit iight 1
Send a message via AIM to Mixxed MC  
Old 04-15-04, 10:47 PM   #11
Killah Bwoy
Ble$$ed With Talent
 
Killah Bwoy's Avatar
 
From: Ham-town/ New York
IP: 970D 9C87

i give this to streetsweepa he came sicker better flow better everything..another easy win was really good lmfao........

punch:street
flow:street
structure:street

vote:street
__________________
KiLlAh BwOy



Blue Print

Fear Me For I Am The Greatest
Send a message via AIM to Killah Bwoy Send a message via MSN to Killah Bwoy  
Old 04-15-04, 11:40 PM   #12
Triple_N
Ya mom massages my nuts
 
Triple_N's Avatar
 
From: Queens, NY
IP: 4289 77F4

Streetsweepa had an actual verse in this battle, I don't know what that was ice but it wasn't a battle verse
Flow: street
structure: street
punches: street
vote: street
__________________
Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
Send a message via AIM to Triple_N  
Old 04-15-04, 11:59 PM   #13
Mixxed MC
Banned: Cheating
 
Mixxed MC's Avatar
 
From: BruNzwiK
IP: E758 F40A

Come on sTreet swweepa soick
no
prob
fo
him
all i gotz ta say
Send a message via AIM to Mixxed MC  
Old 04-16-04, 12:04 AM   #14
anxiety
...
 
From: colorado
IP: B18A 27B8

Quote:
Originally Posted by white-ice
listen as i spit,coz wen i spit i cum raw/leave ur ass thinkin wot the fucks gone on yah?
wack opener, its a good idea to have a PUNCH
u think uz a jay-z/but without the pay G/
ur rapstyles la-zy/itd b quicker 2 page me/
wut? whack.
see i can bust a rhyme ,in twice quick tha time
so read between my lines, n u 2 my start 2 shine!
why dont u diss him instead of self glorify
but thats impossible/coz im 2 philosophical/
yet again^^^
but dnt let that stop u..hve a go/
ur not the only one ive cum across whos jst an average joe.
caliing him average has been the best punch u have thrown, wtf?
u see theres wit in wot i spit/n u 2z gona b gone like king kong,thinking u can stay up here...but ur wrong!!

wow, im not gonna say anymore

super ultra whack 1/10

Quote:
Originally Posted by streetsweepa
come on nigga u cant spit ur structure is weak//
ur punches dont connect, and my shit is elite//
better than his opener, but to be truthful, whack.
u call ur self white ice//
what the fuck kinda name is ICE?? atleast try to improvise!//
improvise?? wow! what a diss
u call me the average joe//
nigga u the one that rymes like a hoe//
how do hoes rhyme?
yea ur name is right, your whole rymescheme is frozen cold//
yea and ur rhymes old and week it might fold//
made fun of rhymes both times, second line killed it
where did u steal all theme rymes from a book?//
thats called plagerism u fuckin crook//
whack first line, his shit hardly rhymed
you might say your philosophical, ur punches are weak//
see this fucking win against u will be bitter sweet//
i didnt even have to try hard, cuz u brought the ice but i brought the HEAT//
ok closer


better verse, not good though 3/10
 
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 08:49 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.