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Old 04-23-04, 01:05 AM   #1
YungAMO
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A Shot in tha Hood

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Pop, Pop nigga another shot in tha hood//if it aint towards my house then my families all good//not carin wat happens so i live my life like i got nuthin to lose//seen some cold shit in the hood so my heart got a bruise//
u may not like me shit i dont care//get me a strap this niggas startin to stare/
who feels how i feel nigga let me know// West Unit in tha hood and we smugglin blow//oh//this is it its the big one here//cant u tell in my cold heart i got nuthin to fear//im new to this site but i aint new to the game//pickin bitches off the bench like u were doin the same//dont let me catch u backstabbin a nigga//we get it poppin in the hood while we lettin off triggas//
so before u come to my nigga let me know//cause u get popped if u dont know AMO//
R.I.P. to all my niggaz pour out a little liquor for yall
holla bak
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Old 04-23-04, 07:44 PM   #2
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im feeling that shit cuz you keeping it real that straps goin off it just aint worth it i just lost one of my niggas that i met threw one of my tight ass niggas and i knew the dude for like 3 months and now his 5 years old son and his 2 years old daught gotta grow up fatherless....RIP VON.....Boston Philly n NY lik shots in the hood....1
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faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1
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Old 04-25-04, 01:45 AM   #3
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i like it, and i don't like much on this site!
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Old 04-30-04, 12:28 AM   #4
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that was whack below average not ok
this is my mood right now too so blah
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Old 04-30-04, 08:38 AM   #5
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u got a couple of things to fix on that
1) u need to write it in bars
2) u need to read it over to make sure it makes sense cause your line "so before u come nigga let me know" didnt make any sense when your talkin about the hood cause u gotta be ready at all times when somethin go down
3)stay on one topic first u tlkin bout niggas shootin then u talkin bout u shootin which doesnt go along wit the topic
i aint really like this 1, i've read better work from u homie whats going on
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