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Old 04-27-04, 10:43 PM   #1
Mentalz
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Biography (Warning: Deep Shit)

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Straight from the Source… A Descriptions of Sorts…
Neva’ Deformed or Forced… This Shits Intense…
This is my Reality Kid… As Real as it Gets…


Ima’ start from the Top and just work my way Down
Life as Miscreant, Jokes, Smiles an’ Frowns
My bringing up wasn’t even close ta’ Disasta’
But everyone has their own Faults an’ Mishaps just…
The path they take is almost always Distorted
Re-paved an’ under constant Reformin’
This is me… Deep as Fissure… Heed the title
For you as a Listener are about to Embark my Recital
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If I think back Enough I can remember the Start
Although it’s Hard… I’ll try ta’ Speak from my Heart
See, When I was young, my Mom and Dad…They Split
I felt like the String of a Yo-Yo that was meant foreva’ ta’ Spin
My Mom Married a Man, and his Child she Carried
Even though he Showed it he just neva’ Seemed Caring-
…but, Now that i'm grown I gotta show Love…
Thank you, Kenny, for Raisin’ me from a Seed to a Bud.
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To my Sister, Sharon, my best friend for life
A little Older then I, you Always Thought you were Right
I feel for you, Sharon, Dad stepped out on you as a Young One
Fuck his Bitch Ass; He was the Dumb One…
Smartest person I know, in School you got A’s
Neva’ Strayed from the Subject always Remained on the Page
Like a Queen you have Rose…Sprouted Thorns Thick an’ Tall…
Human beings are Neva’ Perfect but you come close to it all.

Straight from the Source… A Descriptions of Sorts…
Neva’ Deformed or Forced… This Shits Intense…
This is my Reality Kid… As Real as it Gets…


Ken’s Son, my brother Jason, you need ta’ Collect ya’self
Or soon you’ll be Facin’ Numerous Years of Probation… No wealth
Get with it Kid, what the Fuck are you doin?
Can’t you see that it’s your own Life that you’ll Ruin?
But whateva’ – Live an Learn ya’self Kid…
You Resemble a Childs Mentality Stuck with an Invisible Bib
I hope you Realize someday an’ heed my Advice
An’ next time you start thinking… Stop an Think Twice.
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To my Uncle Guido... Foreva’ Rest-in-Peace for Eternity
Like my third Father when I did Bad you always wanted a Turn-at-me
Sometimes I wish that things were Different…but on that Note:
I wish you Stopped Sniffin that Coke, Poor Kids fatherless now, No Joke.
Explosions so Potent 8 Cars, Fire an’ Gas…
All we have of you now is a Ceramic Vase full of Ash…
Ya’ last words foreva’ Echo in my Brain like Ripples
“Neva’ Give Up” Inspiration gona make my Salary Triple.

Straight from the Source… A Descriptions of Sorts…
Neva’ Deformed or Forced… This Shits Intense…
This is my Reality Kid… As Real as it Gets…


Mom, Dad…Words can’t Explain my Gratitude…
So I’ll keep it Short an Simple…Turn up the Amplitude
Thank you for Life, Creation, Experience an’ Learning
Thank you for Answers that as a Child I was Yearning
Burning, Sometimes Discipline was Needed
Whenever I chose to Hate, Make Violence you Succeeded
To foreva’ my Love…Intense as it gets
Foreva’ in time I’ll be ya’ Golden Blue-Print.
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Down the road of Life I faced Strife, Hardships and Chaos
But built in me was a Power ta’ make all that shit Pay Off
Born in Modesto, But moved up ta’ Sac town...
Here’s where I Learned, that no matter what… Id neva’ Back Down
Here’s a Fact now, this Is comin from within me
Pencil in Hand… Thrust Open with Imagery
My life is Hardly hard from Others…
I truly feel for the Children without any Father’s or Mothers
…You’ve just been Tainted by Mentalz... this is Real Ish...
Now it’s time for me ta’ head on back ta’ my White Urban Village...

Straight from the Source… A Descriptions of Sorts…
Neva’ Deformed or Forced… This Shits Intense…
This is my Reality Kid… As Real as it Gets…


Peace.
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Old 04-27-04, 11:37 PM   #2
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Old 04-28-04, 02:14 AM   #3
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your definately a real deal heavy hitting lyricist my crhymie. keep up the sick work.

give my boy some honest feedback y'all........he's the truth, mark my words.

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Old 04-28-04, 02:20 AM   #4
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nice shit i cant say anything bad it was dope straight 2 the point
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Old 04-28-04, 03:50 PM   #5
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Old 04-29-04, 04:46 PM   #6
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Old 04-29-04, 04:55 PM   #7
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yo this shit was tite altho there was some forced rhymes. the structure was nice vocab was great. the flow was good to. not much metas or similes but u made up for it. shit was from the heart, huh? thats the best sht

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