i may be new here but i aint no rookie
unless u want me 2 eat out ur mum u'll fetch me a cookie
hurry up bitch coz dis new kids starving
its ur name into a grave im gna b carving
ghost rida is ur name how u come up wit dat
ur aint invisible dumshit mustve thought of it while on crack
smokin ur dads dick aint a way 2 get high
but i kno ur motto ' smoke dick and fly'

dis lookz like a good battle ya need to hurry up n battle tho i'll vote wen ya do

lets get........ayo this nigga spit like is rhymes is cool,i'ma have his ass layed out, pissin hiself like old people in retirement homes//u couldn't match my style,should already figured it,but your ass is slow like retards,cause ya just not gettin it//i'll have ya ass wetted up like ya 1 years old,i got 8 shells fo that ass to put ya mouth on hold//they would think i'ma chriopracter the way i'm brakin ya back,man u stay on my balls like kobe stays shaqs//u need a ghostwriter kid,cause if ya had a flipmode,u still couldn't busta rhyme cause u whack kid//i'll have searcin for fame like stevie wonder,i'll blow ya brains out leave ya punk ass under the covers//think ya hot?,but i beg to differ,u couldn't match the kid if the battle was even handed to ya//beatin me is like u beatin aids,it ain't happen,cause i spit flames so hot it will burn out ya braids...........holla back

i'll felt this battle was alittle weak here the break down

punches:ghost
flow:ghost
wordplay:ghost
structre:ghost
overall:ghost

can you guys return the fava and finish my battle plz vote on them and i'll return the fava any time

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the links are on my sig

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The Legacy

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uppin for votes.......................................

This shit was not even a battle Ghostrida took dis shit automatically because the other guy was really really shitty.. Advice 4 Chaotic step yo game up cause u r really shitty..............

Ghost the way tat u wrote tat shit is annoyin as hell & it took me mad time 2 read it so fix yo flow cause shit is really really annoyin


vote:Ghost

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Holla at me when u stop writing rhymes wit dictionaries shit is dead

hurry up and close dis shit out lets go holla back

ok checked out Wog'z drop & it was whacker than my first battle (which I won) than I read Ghost's way better than Wog'z drop better flow, vocab, punches he takes this battle in every category possible .......................

do a honest vote on my battle: it's in my signature

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punches:ghost
flow:ghost
wordplay:ghost
structre:ghost
overall:ghost
opener-gost
closer-gost

gost took this battle easly.....your punches was good but you need to elevate and reword your punches.....lots of peeps on this site need to reword they punches......you had a good opener but you could upp the hit power

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ok gosht has this one but hey he had an alright opening and a good closure but gosht defended himself good and he came out with a hell of a closure.

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