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05-09-04, 09:40 AM | #1 | ||||
This is my first post!
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05-09-04, 09:52 AM | #2 | |||
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Erm you can rhyme but your not rhyming all the syballes like you suppose to plus it wasnt even that good you were talking about things that nobody cared.
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05-09-04, 09:53 AM | #3 | |||||||
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quite nice for a fist drop.i got a kind of old skool feel reading that,was imagining some sugar hill beats with it....keep dropping.....peace....
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05-09-04, 12:18 PM | #4 | |||||||
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
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well u need at least one multi...and have none...ya know..and it wasn't that creative..learn how to write bars ya know...so it looks put together..not like a paragraph...ur vocab could step up also...is this ur first time doing this? *uno*
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