10 lines
no feedin
no bitin
no crew
no hatin
you spit first
good luck

my lyricz devine elevatin thru time in a rhyme
yet i see ya standin still cant find a good line
u hesistatin kneez shakin ma rappinz a crime
coz i'd hit ya wida verse n leave ya insatutionalised
i bit ya wida curse worse than death-dis be revelutionalised
my word be forever vitalised as i break ur back an leave ya paralised
only despised coz i hurt ya,now u fallen an weak
kicked all dirt on ya-now u crawlin back to speak
insert my diss within ya da poison will rip ya apart
hear my hissin gramma ur choice to be killed 4om the start
shocked by the toxicity of ma wordz?hold ur head
but tragically u discover ma lyrics left ya braindead..........
flowz now ure spittin with pros so stop actin like a punk ass hoe

aight check it....
Dang nigga Ill give ya your props you came weak...Geez!
Everyone look hes so wack he said
Nigga you know ya prewritted so go ahead take a peak....
B.c ya studderin b/c ya cant find ya raps nigga this aint hide n go seek...
Nigga ya spit so dry they dryer then paper plates....
Bitch ya probably 3 years old...Studyin computers and probably the son of bill gates
Ya cant battle...And im not a hoe,ya cant even reply to ya loans....
B.c when he shit on his self he reflect more than microphones....
I might KO you I might just win ..everyone take a bid...
But Ya just got murked like ya partner Tupac did.....

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yo this was a decent battle and heres the break down

mc murder nice flow and a couple good punchs
best line-coz i'd hit ya wida verse n leave ya insatutionalised
i bit ya wida curse worse than death-dis be revelutionalised
my word be forever vitalised as i break ur back an leave ya paralised
worst line-flowz now ure spittin with pros so stop actin like a punk ass hoe

flows nice flow, punchs and structure
best line-Nigga ya spit so dry they dryer then paper plates....
Bitch ya probably 3 years old...Studyin computers and probably the son of bill gates
worst line-Ya cant battle...And im not a hoe,ya cant even reply to ya loans....
B.c when he shit on his self he reflect more than microphones....

both need to elevate but my vote goes to flows.

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weak battle...mc murder you got some good vocab and a lil bit of wordplay but nothing too hott u didnt have hardly any punches or personals structure was good flow was OK
.flows. u had a ok opener with a good personal a couple good punches but every rhyme you spit u talk about how the person is prolly 3 years old its played out allready come more orijinal

vote: .flows. overall he had a better verse than MC did but ok verses from both

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my lyricz devine elevatin thru time in a rhyme
yet i see ya standin still cant find a good line
u hesistatin kneez shakin ma rappinz a crime
Weak opener
coz i'd hit ya wida verse n leave ya insatutionalised
i bit ya wida curse worse than death-dis be revelutionalised
my word be forever vitalised as i break ur back an leave ya paralised
almost a punch
only despised coz i hurt ya,now u fallen an weak
kicked all dirt on ya-now u crawlin back to speak
Not a punch
insert my diss within ya da poison will rip ya apart
hear my hissin gramma ur choice to be killed 4om the start
wwwwwwwwweak
shocked by the toxicity of ma wordz?hold ur head
but tragically u discover ma lyrics left ya braindead..........
aiight punch
flowz now ure spittin with pros so stop actin like a punk ass hoe
WEAK CLOSER

Get some personals playa



aight check it....
Dang nigga Ill give ya your props you came weak...Geez!
Everyone look hes so wack he said
Quote:
he will murder all MC's...

Nigga you know ya prewritted so go ahead take a peak....
B.c ya studderin b/c ya cant find ya raps nigga this aint hide n go seek...
Good opener and personnal
Nigga ya spit so dry they dryer then paper plates....
Bitch ya probably 3 years old...Studyin computers and probably the son of bill gates
Good went into weak
Ya cant battle...And im not a hoe,ya cant even reply to ya loans....
B.c when he shit on his self he reflect more than microphones....
this is aiight
I might KO you I might just win ..everyone take a bid...
But Ya just got murked like ya partner Tupac did.....
mediocre closer

Aiight da lowdown
MC MURDER-6/10
.flows.-8/10

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