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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Re$TricTed | 5 | 100.00% | |
Kollision | 0 | 0% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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05-16-04, 10:51 AM | #1 | |
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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.::Re$tricted Vs. Kollision::.
IP: B80A A22F
.::Rules::. 6 Lines - 3 Bars 5 Votez Winz No Crew No Hate No D/R Votes Spits Due 15 Minutes After Checks Good Luck ~R~ |
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05-16-04, 10:52 AM | #2 | |
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: B80A A22F
.::Checkity Check::.
~R~ |
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05-16-04, 10:57 AM | #3 | |
Banned: Spamming
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IP: BCBC 6745
Ccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccchhh hheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeccccccccccccccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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05-16-04, 11:06 AM | #4 | |
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: B80A A22F
I'm Ripping Out Your Spinal Cord and Wrapping It Around Ya Neck.. Choking Ya Mic Source, HeavyWieght Punches KO'N This Wannabe Vet.. Kollision Is Wishing He Would Diminish In Vision or Hide In Prisin.. Cause Hiding Behind Bars Is The Only Way This Kid Is Fit To Risin.. This Kid Is Not Seen, Only Kollision I'm Seeing Is My Fist To Ya Face.. Punches To Embrace, Mints On My Knuckles To Give Your Spits A Better Taste.. ~R~ |
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05-16-04, 11:06 AM | #5 | |
Banned: Spamming
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IP: BCBC 6745
U The 'Type To Deep Throat' For 'Free Votes' And Stay 'Perminently~Soaked~In~Semen'//
For U Grabbin The 'Mic's A Complete Joke' I 'Eat Flows' And 'Contently~Choke~This~Demon'// The Way I Got 'Tips' They Ain't 'Dart's Bitch' They Stay 'Intense~Hollow~Festivals'// Look This Kat Say's *He's Got Balls* It Only If He 'Accidently~ Swallowed~Testicals'// U Neva *Cum Right* Like A 'Magical Discharge', So Keep On Your 'Tactics~Of~Wackness'// Cuz Spittin Gets Ya 'Magical Dick Hard', Me..I Can Beat U While *Holdin Back* Like A 'Chiropractic~Practice'// - No Real Explanations Needed.. Kinda A Keystyle Type Verse...Not Alotta Thought Put Into It....Holla! |
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05-16-04, 11:16 AM | #6 | |
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
kollision:
your structure needs much work, kinda wack, good use of multies though U The 'Type To Deep Throat' For 'Free Votes' And Stay 'Perminently~Soaked~In~Semen'// For U Grabbin The 'Mic's A Complete Joke' I 'Eat Flows' And 'Contently~Choke~This~Demon'// ^^ good use of multies,nice line, unfortanetly the rest wasnt that good^^^^ U Neva *Cum Right* Like A 'Magical Discharge', So Keep On Your 'Tactics~Of~Wackness'// Cuz Spittin Gets Ya 'Magical Dick Hard', Me..I Can Beat U While *Holdin Back* Like A 'Chiropractic~Practice'// ^^^^^^ terrible line structure is wack your line was way to strecthed^^^^^^^ thats your worst line need work on ya structure overall*6* ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- restricted why only 6 lines? your punches hit fairly hard and you had nice structure but your punches need work Kollision Is Wishing He Would Diminish In Vision or Hide In Prisin.. Cause Hiding Behind Bars Is The Only Way This Kid Is Fit To Risin.. &^^^^^^^^ good line nice multies and punches overall*7* ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ my vote: restricted
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05-16-04, 11:26 AM | #7 | |
New to RB
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IP: 3240 794D
Restricted: You had a couple good punches in there. Your opening was average but I like your closing punch with the mints on the knuckles... That shit was clever. Your flow and vocab was there, this was a nice verse for 15 minutes... Keep spitting fam.
Kollision: Your opening was ok. Your closing line was decent but it was to stretched out to give any real meaning and power to the punch. I like your use of multis and your vocab and flow is all there but I think you need to work on the punchline part of your flow because this is what you need to when battles. Keep spitting homie. Vote: Restricted http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124472 (COULD YA'LL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE PLEASE SINCE I TOOK TIME TO VOTE ON YOURS?? GOOD LOOKIN!!!!)
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05-16-04, 11:32 AM | #8 | |
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: B80A A22F
Aight...
Restricted: 2 Kollision: 0 Aiyo Hit Up My Other Verse Against Fine Mind.. ~R~ |
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05-16-04, 12:17 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 4289 77F4
Restricted.....hott stuff everything dont really need
no work........you came nice with the similies the metaphore.......almost evrything thats all I realy have to say Killsion-alright but not that good.....structure was horrible/......which give us a reason for the complexoty.. everything else was nice v/restricted
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05-16-04, 12:21 PM | #10 | |
Most Wanted
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IP: 0CD4 8C79
Restricted,I think you won this win u came wit some hot barz,i liked ur saying
Vote:Restricted |
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05-16-04, 12:29 PM | #11 | |
Banned: Spamming
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IP: BCBC 6745
Nice Battle Mayne...I'm Jus Startin To Elevate......Holla
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05-16-04, 12:37 PM | #12 | |
Killin' G'z
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IP: 0A09 2FF0
Kollision - Good spit man, your flow was hott and so was your multi's your punches were iight too...
Best Line - The Way I Got 'Tips' They Ain't 'Dart's Bitch' They Stay 'Intense~Hollow~Festivals'// Look This Kat Say's *He's Got Balls* It Only If He 'Accidently~ Swallowed~Testicals'// Worst Line - NONE Re - Good spit man, awesome flow.. and your multi;s were good and punches was hott. Best Line - This Kid Is Not Seen, Only Kollision I'm Seeing Is My Fist To Ya Face.. Punches To Embrace, Mints On My Knuckles To Give Your Spits A Better Taste.. Worst Line - NONE OVERALL - Good battle here, both had some good punches and good flow. I gotta give my vote to Re though for better punches and a hotter flow. Koll you had mad multi's and good vocab.. but I wasnt feelin your punches as much. Work on some personals man, thats all your missin.. and you will be hott. VOTE - Re RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124417
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05-16-04, 05:13 PM | #13 | |
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 9DA6 C725
aite no match really here dis wuz a 1 sided win
re$tricted-nice drop merked dis cat wit ease bestline-I'm Ripping Out Your Spinal Cord and Wrapping It Around Ya Neck.. Choking Ya Mic Source, HeavyWieght Punches KO'N This Wannabe Vet.. beat his whole verse worsteline-none overall verse gets a 9.6/10 it dont get no eassierrrrr kollison-aight drop juss no match in dis contest bestline-your structure needs much work, kinda wack, good use of multies though U The 'Type To Deep Throat' For 'Free Votes' And Stay 'Perminently~Soaked~In~Semen'// For U Grabbin The 'Mic's A Complete Joke' I 'Eat Flows' And 'Contently~Choke~This~Demon'// nice start worsteline-note really none but still lost overall verse gets a 9/10 nice drop
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05-16-04, 05:19 PM | #14 |
GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: 4289 77F4
U The 'Type To Deep Throat' For 'Free Votes' And Stay 'Perminently~Soaked~In~Semen'//
For U Grabbin The 'Mic's A Complete Joke' I 'Eat Flows' And 'Contently~Choke~This~Demon'// ^^^ 1st line was good...2nd line had too much filler to match the rhyme..decent The Way I Got 'Tips' They Ain't 'Dart's Bitch' They Stay 'Intense~Hollow~Festivals'// Look This Kat Say's *He's Got Balls* It Only If He 'Accidently~ Swallowed~Testicals'// ^^^ funny...but the set-up coulda been better Cuz Spittin Gets Ya 'Magical Dick Hard', Me..I Can Beat U While *Holdin Back* Like A 'Chiropractic~Practice'// ^^ kinda of eh closer... I'm Ripping Out Your Spinal Cord and Wrapping It Around Ya Neck.. Choking Ya Mic Source, HeavyWieght Punches KO'N This Wannabe Vet.. ^^ strong opener This Kid Is Not Seen, Only Kollision I'm Seeing Is My Fist To Ya Face.. Punches To Embrace, Mints On My Knuckles To Give Your Spits A Better Taste.. ^^^lol...strong closer This verse was so short, I had to search up and down the board for it. Okay, my vote goes to Restricted because he had direct hits with the few lines he had. Vote: RES. |
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