alrite lets agree on some rules,
since we both noobs still, if ya wanna call me that,
how bout 10 lines max?
no crew/hate votes..
30 min. to spit after check in?

wut ya think?

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aight, sounds good. im checkin in now, ill drop within 10

absolutely shit is all this guy can doo, hes just a lil scrappy//
hes accepted hes crappy, losing is what makes him happy//
if your all that why the fuck woulda ya live in trillville?//
i guess its simple, hes not good enough for the town of skill//
youve entered four battles and aint got a result//
i wont bother depening the wound, ima just add salt//
now your shaken, not stirred, now hurry up and awaken//
look round, your eyes aint blurred, youll see its ya woman ive taken//
ill start a crew, add theone, nerves and smokey joe//
we through punches, you just managed a hokey poke//

alrite, im startn now, peace.

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In this battle, ya ass is goin down like the world trade//
And tha people that died, is playn the words that u made//
I hate to put it lyke that, but that’s just the way its runnin//
Cause you rhymes cant compare to mine, to me there nothin//
No offence to tha others, but your crew would be wack//
Cuz theone, nerves and smokey joe could do better than that//
I doubt them boys want to be mentioned in ya rhymes//
Probley got them changing their names, I know I’d change mine//
Im end this battle the way I always do, Like a beast//
You were just beat bitch, now REST IN PEACE//

R.i.P.
Ill is it?

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And rest in pieces this dude does, scrappy.

It was close y'all, but scrappy's verse appealed to me more. But I know he could do beter n that. It's just that he hit harder, and was a little funnier than you were Ill.

vote- scrappy

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ill vote on this if yall vote on round two me an verbal.

Scrappy took that easily ill is it need to work on his lyrics

vote-scrappy
not enough posts to actually vote

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scrapy-you had a lot more funnier shit there
and yours was a little harder...

ill is it-you need to come a bit better. not bad tho
pretty good structure...

vote- lil scrapy

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scrappy took diz 1 by far wit mo appealing & convincing shit 2 say otha den ill

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ay letz get them damn votes, i'll return tha favor everybody.Peace.

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scrappy took this one... just dont put that many multis.. and u need some flow man.. i was sorta lost at ya first 4 lines...

i wont bother depening the wound, ima just add salt//
now your shaken, not stirred, now hurry up and awaken//
look round, your eyes aint blurred, youll see its ya woman ive taken//

ill is it.. those were ur only lines that were good.. your whole verse has to be good not part of it..

anyways vote--

LIL SCRAPPY

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<centeR>
BATTLES
<marquee>$pit vs. Familya
$pitilicous vs. Most Wanted</marquee>
ILL Leagal Jrs.

sorry i cant edit my post but can u hit up my sig ... my battle is being slept on.. thank you

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<centeR>
BATTLES
<marquee>$pit vs. Familya
$pitilicous vs. Most Wanted</marquee>
ILL Leagal Jrs.

Ill Is It's DROP

absolutely shit is all this guy can doo, hes just a lil scrappy//
hes accepted hes crappy, losing is what makes him happy//
OK THAT WAS A WEAK ASS OPENER 4.5/10
if your all that why the fuck woulda ya live in trillville?//
i guess its simple, hes not good enough for the town of skill//
WEAK AGAIN 5/10
youve entered four battles and aint got a result//
i wont bother depening the wound, ima just add salt//
HAHA NOT EVEN GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME TO WIPE MY SHIT WITH 3/10
now your shaken, not stirred, now hurry up and awaken//
look round, your eyes aint blurred, youll see its ya woman ive taken//
WEAK NOT FEELING 5.5/10
ill start a crew, add theone, nerves and smokey joe//
we through punches, you just managed a hokey poke//
WHAT THE FUCK HOKEY POKE????? 4/10

OVERALL:4.5/10///45%

lil scrappy's DROP:

In this battle, ya ass is goin down like the world trade//
And tha people that died, is playn the words that u made//
AIGHT OPENER BETTER THAN ILL'S 6.5/10
I hate to put it lyke that, but that’s just the way its runnin//
Cause you rhymes cant compare to mine, to me there nothin//
NOT A GOOD PUNCH 6/10
No offence to tha others, but your crew would be wack//
Cuz theone, nerves and smokey joe could do better than that//
WEAK BUT YOU USED HIS NAME AGAINST HIM 6/10
I doubt them boys want to be mentioned in ya rhymes//
Probley got them changing their names, I know I’d change mine//
I WOULD CHANGE IT TOO....BUT WEAK 5/10
Im end this battle the way I always do, Like a beast//
You were just beat bitch, now REST IN PEACE//
OK YOU USE THAT CLOSER TOO MUCH LOSE POINTS FOR THAT 6/10

OVERALL:6/10///60%

VOTE GOES TO: LIL SCRAPPY.

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