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punchline prince 0 0%
smartzz 5 100.00%
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Old 06-03-04, 07:00 PM   #1
smartzz
Flyweight
 
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From: jersee
SmArTzZ vs punchlineprince

IP: 7BE2 A0A1

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due by 10
no dr votes
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-03-04, 08:27 PM   #2
smartzz
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From: jersee
IP: 4289 77F4

G'l

ima destroy thiz femonem emcee,wit hard punches daat'll be crushing ya teeth
leaving u dekapitated stuck under beneath,cuz i got a betta flow den boats on the sea
u the punchline prince ay? well u aint causing harm 2 me,u wak dont u agree?
wen the heat makin u burn to the 3rd dergree,and i wont loose,
and wen i win i dun wanna hear no ezcuse,cuz weak rapz u produce,

....so wit the sound of the tone.,juss leave it alone,
leavin ya carcus in the ground wit molded bonez,..and a broken neck,
wit flamez leavin u drippin sweat,beatin u doen leaving u a wreck..

...cuz i stay on top,spit sick leavin u green like rodger clotz,
untill u sizzle in pop,spittin 4 shizzle y diz faggot dropz..

and i aint a fan u kno,i got da band wit flow..
and put a shell to ya back like michael angelo(frm ninja turtles)
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
<img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" />
I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

<img src="http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1773/impossibleisnothing.gif" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" />
I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-03-04, 08:29 PM   #3
smartzz
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From: jersee
IP: 4289 77F4

i waz rushing so i got a few mistakes
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-03-04, 11:35 PM   #4
Punchline Prince
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From: Dallas,TX
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Can u believe he classified his location/
Prolly because hes at he masturbatin,and dont really want no altercation/
And speakin of masterbation,...this dude is wack/
And he wacks to that gay triple x in his backpack/
However gave u tha name smartzz waz either dead or sick/
Cuz judgin from ya grammar you dummer than a bag of bricks/
And get that penicillin away from me/
Cuz my lyrical spit is too sick so i must be elderly/
And I know whats up with tha sonic picture/
It symbolizes How fast you can run if i ever tried 2 come and get cha/
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Old 06-04-04, 12:02 AM   #5
Punchline Prince
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uppin for votes
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Old 06-04-04, 07:07 AM   #6
smartzz
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From: jersee
IP: 3240 794D

uppi 4 votes
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-04-04, 05:32 PM   #7
smartzz
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From: jersee
IP: C1DA C961

can ppl vote please
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
<img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" />
I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-04-04, 05:49 PM   #8
50hater_killer
Knock out kings fur life
 
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From: ky
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i have to go with smartzz his flow was better he had better personals, and he had more comedy in it and his closure helped him to close it well. so my vote goes to smartzz.
 
Old 06-04-04, 06:59 PM   #9
reddot06
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alright close battle.. but smartzz was more in depth... prince you were real basic... better punches by smartzz... so i gotta go with smartzz
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Old 06-04-04, 09:19 PM   #10
smartzz
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From: jersee
IP: 3240 794D

iight uppin 4 votes
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-04-04, 09:27 PM   #11
Big Kountry
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prince you got no punch lines stop thinkin you do

that was wack man period this was a sonning

you should be his bitch now prince

v/ smartzz
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Old 06-05-04, 06:42 AM   #12
smartzz
Flyweight
 
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From: jersee
IP: C1DA C961

iight can ppl vote please
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
<img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" />
I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

<img src="http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1773/impossibleisnothing.gif" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" />
I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-05-04, 10:06 AM   #13
.::N-Sight::.
GrOwN aSs MaN
 
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weak...wack...battle

first smart

ima destroy thiz femonem emcee,wit hard punches daat'll be crushing ya teeth
leaving u dekapitated stuck under beneath,cuz i got a betta flow den boats on the sea

^^ femonem = feminine?...aiight

I feel u tryna come with the punches and metas...they needs serious work though...focus on making the metaphors connect with the punches

12/20


Can u believe he classified his location/
Prolly because hes at he masturbatin,and dont really want no altercation/
And speakin of masterbation,...this dude is wack/
And he wacks to that gay triple x in his backpack/


^^ Too simple with little complexity...add metas/wordplay to your punches


10/20


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Old 06-05-04, 10:36 AM   #14
shadow
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this was kinda wack
but here is how it breaks down
smartzz
u won easily but you have to step it up
aight?
it cam down to punchlines
and that you won so thats why im voting for u
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structure both of yall need to work on dat
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punchline prince u need to work on flow strucutre and personals
punches are why u lost this battle u have no good punches
ur name doesnt work out
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my vote smartz cuz of stronger and more efficient punchlines
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