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06-12-04, 03:04 AM | #1 | |||||||
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poison VIP collab
IP: CDAA 2D0A
im tired of cats unda estamatin tha skill, how many times i gotta tell ya i don take you hataz fa real//
ya like laffy taffys an i put a joke on each rappa, most of em aint real, jus choke artists an weak actors// they aint from tha streets they don really do wut they say, they aint holdn heat an they aint ready fa no real gun play// listen, i aint tha best, but i damn sho aint tha worst, lil aj took that theory when he wrote his first verse// im gettin betta ery day of tha week, my rhymes is infinte an my styles very unique// POISON^^^^ VIP here we go a gangsta is a name that i can claim/ from all tha snitchin murder and pain/ i'm gonna take tha world by storm/ thought i was dead i'm back in tha phisical form/ ive witnessed tha bodies just drop/ ive made tha barrels just pop pop/ u can feel in my rhymes tha passion/ me and poison are lyrical assasins/ maken bodies fade like bad fashions/ so take are bullets in large rashins/
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06-12-04, 03:32 AM | #2 | |||||
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IP: A50A 9D96
ayo my bad i had to battle bigpimpn real quick
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06-12-04, 03:48 AM | #3 | |||||
.::Blood Up::.
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IP: B90F 540D
elevate aight home bois...holla at my open mic..."ruff tymez"Pt2 aight be e.z wun
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06-12-04, 03:53 AM | #4 | |||||
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IP: A50A 9D96
wut chu think we tryna do ery day elevate home boi, but if you check out my battle ill check out urs.
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06-12-04, 03:53 AM | #5 | |||||
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IP: A50A 9D96
not ya battle but the shit ya wrote prt.2
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06-12-04, 03:54 AM | #6 | |||||
.::Blood Up::.
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IP: B90F 540D
but ye elevate but ya got some potential aight be ez wun...
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06-12-04, 04:06 AM | #7 | |||||
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IP: A50A 9D96
ight pc
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06-12-04, 08:55 AM | #8 | |||||||
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: 3494 F712
dis isnt good...evalute...needs alot of work on advacnes skills...too simple bois...try gen...but nice try .....stay up..no beef
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06-12-04, 12:30 PM | #9 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: CBD1 4982
good flow
but u need 2 get more complexed the 2nd verse lines need 2 b longer and add more vocab pretty good keep droppin
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06-12-04, 10:42 PM | #10 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: B767 2477
thanx to who ever gave a compliment, but if you aint gon give advice, don write shit in here.
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