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Old 06-12-04, 03:04 AM   #1
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im tired of cats unda estamatin tha skill, how many times i gotta tell ya i don take you hataz fa real//
ya like laffy taffys an i put a joke on each rappa, most of em aint real, jus choke artists an weak actors//
they aint from tha streets they don really do wut they say, they aint holdn heat an they aint ready fa no real gun play//
listen, i aint tha best, but i damn sho aint tha worst, lil aj took that theory when he wrote his first verse//
im gettin betta ery day of tha week, my rhymes is infinte an my styles very unique//

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a gangsta is a name that i can claim/
from all tha snitchin murder and pain/
i'm gonna take tha world by storm/
thought i was dead i'm back in tha phisical form/
ive witnessed tha bodies just drop/
ive made tha barrels just pop pop/
u can feel in my rhymes tha passion/
me and poison are lyrical assasins/
maken bodies fade like bad fashions/
so take are bullets in large rashins/
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Old 06-12-04, 03:32 AM   #2
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ayo my bad i had to battle bigpimpn real quick
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Old 06-12-04, 03:48 AM   #3
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elevate aight home bois...holla at my open mic..."ruff tymez"Pt2 aight be e.z wun
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Old 06-12-04, 03:53 AM   #4
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wut chu think we tryna do ery day elevate home boi, but if you check out my battle ill check out urs.
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Old 06-12-04, 03:53 AM   #5
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not ya battle but the shit ya wrote prt.2
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Old 06-12-04, 03:54 AM   #6
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but ye elevate but ya got some potential aight be ez wun...
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Old 06-12-04, 04:06 AM   #7
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ight pc
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Old 06-12-04, 08:55 AM   #8
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dis isnt good...evalute...needs alot of work on advacnes skills...too simple bois...try gen...but nice try .....stay up..no beef
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Old 06-12-04, 12:30 PM   #9
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good flow
but u need 2 get more complexed the 2nd verse lines need 2 b longer and add more vocab
pretty good keep droppin
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Old 06-12-04, 10:42 PM   #10
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thanx to who ever gave a compliment, but if you aint gon give advice, don write shit in here.
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