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Lil A.J. | 0 | 0% | |
Complex Illness | 5 | 100.00% | |
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06-11-04, 12:04 AM | #1 | |
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Complex Illness vs Lil A.J
IP: F68E 299E
Complex Rulez
No Hate Votes No Crew Votes No Biteing No Feeding No d/r Votes You Spit First 10 lines min 15 lines max Dead Line Friday 6:00 PM
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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes |
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06-11-04, 12:09 AM | #2 | |
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IP: F68E 299E
Yo You Gonna Check in Or What im Trying to GEt a Battle na mein igiht homie be Ez 1
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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes |
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06-11-04, 12:17 AM | #3 |
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IP: 66D5 20D0
Man who is this clown
Imma take him to town and beat his ass down Im tha one who rockin tha streets Im make people bounce all across tha globe I got ur girl takin off her clothes So ya don't come close to me Cuz around me thats how u get fucked up Im about to drop this bitch so he can go suck While I go fuck his hoe cuz I'm tha headline U can't bust a line if it got stuck up ur ass So go to bed before ur mommy starts to fuss u low down fucker |
06-11-04, 12:26 AM | #4 | |
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IP: F68E 299E
ok lemmie spit
Yo Now for u i think u took a Series Of Time... If You Ever battle another person try to accualy Rhyme... Man A Battle Like this for me its a Definit win... Niggaz So Whack He was afraid to CHeck in... Yo A Record Deal for Lil A.J. He whould never get hired... Cause after this battle no 1 knows him he's Stated Retired... Now he's Over Exsager-ateing He Thinks he won... I Heard Better Beef Lines from a hot dog Bun... Nigga Dumb for jeans hE Said he made-the-Fade... But when ever i get a vote ur still not getting Played... /\ means like duh u suck so u wont get it 5 minute Key in 1
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06-11-04, 12:35 AM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
aight lil aj word of advice get betta just bein real
flow complex structure complex vocab complex punches complex overall vote complex
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06-11-04, 12:52 AM | #6 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
COmplex took this by everything
Complex-Easy drop and weak but easy to beat him Had nothing in there noting at all not very hard punches or nothing...But You didnt need to becuz he was easy..Keep elevatin lil-Work on Punches alot better..Structure was there but your verses was shitty..I mean they where wack You need to elevate kid and Look at other battles to see how to improve v/CompleX IllNess Return the favor in this now http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127309
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06-11-04, 01:05 AM | #7 |
New to RB
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IP: 66D5 20D0
Man how u gonna tell me how to drop lines im tha one that kicked ur ass last time
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06-11-04, 07:18 AM | #8 |
Dope.
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IP: DEAF D85A
Owned...^^
Complex to this one with ease he had better everything.. Lil you seriously need to ask a vetto help you out because that wasnt good at all.. Peep this.. i peeped yours http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129140
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06-11-04, 09:23 AM | #9 | |
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 4289 77F4
one sided battle complex illness definately took this...his punches actually made sense and were pretty hott for someone at his level lol jk...but decent wordplay nice structure consistent flow...good verse...as for lil aj that was one of the worst verses i have ever seen on RB...half of it didnt rhyme so when u got to the second half of your verse u didnt even wanna read it thats how bad it was lil AJ u really need to elevate in all areas...first of like making sure your lines rhyme that always helps and that you have punches and not just filler
vote : complex illness ~!1!~
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06-16-04, 02:33 AM | #10 | |
.:So~So~Good:.
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IP: B42A 99E8
Vote=Complex Illness
He was just overall better.
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