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bcdynamic 0 0%
Economics 5 100.00%
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Old 06-25-04, 09:03 PM   #1
Plutonium
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Economics vs bcdynamic

IP: 853E 9028

check in by Saturday 10pm Eastern Time
Verse due in an hour after checking in
I'll spit first
10-15lines
no crew votes
no dick riding
no hate votes
etc

good luck
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Old 06-25-04, 09:05 PM   #2
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I'm checking in.............

about to drop my verse soon.....

of course i have 1 hour from now.......
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Old 06-25-04, 09:35 PM   #3
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here's a quick 10 for this n00b....

check this out....yo.....Bitch living his life using lies…he’s 18 when he’s born in 1988//
Kid can’t even count…probably reading milk carton to educate//
The cat’s feeling nervous…obviously never battled a business man*//
I use my economic diploma…here, let me wipe off those sweat glands //
I’m just way better…your rhymes are like written a fucking Chinese rapper//
Boasting that you’re in a crew…wackest cat in his cipher//
Thinking you’re so sick…your claiming days are just over//
Make this cat shit on himself…telling your mommy yeah I already fucked her//
Slap this bitch and blast him into the middle of cyber space//
Bitch you’re not welcome, you’re a disgrace to the human race//

Don’t get some lines? Check his profile….

* Check my name....
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Old 06-25-04, 11:55 PM   #4
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come on bcdynamic, drop your verse soon.............
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Old 06-25-04, 11:56 PM   #5
Plutonium
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hurry up, hurry up, hurry up..........................
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Old 06-26-04, 01:01 AM   #6
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From: capital c columbus oh
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yo economics ya style is straight going down the drain/
like george bush was controllin yu and im talkin bout the economy/
but wat i got yu lack this this guy got the wackness ya rymes is like a derailed train dawg they trackless/
yu dont get no gulz dawg yu mackless/
yu jus wack yu need to go to the back of the emcee line/
but battlin yu im wastin my time//
yo due my rap style one of a kind/
this dues rymes is chewable but i spitem up/
so ima do like pac did biggie ima hitem up/
this guys name shouldnt be called economics/
he should be called mister shitty/
cause this guys styles more dingy than bad bitty/
off the pootie tang/
due fuckin wit me ........he'll neva hang/
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Old 06-26-04, 01:05 AM   #7
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vote peeps

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come on vote peeps yall got to vote aight jus vote
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Old 06-26-04, 03:39 AM   #8
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aight people let's get some of them votes into this battle, and i want them explained and honest
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Old 06-26-04, 03:42 AM   #9
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iight iight this battle was pretty one sided and i gotta give this one to economics...

economics
your verse pretty tight...but ive seen you do alot better at times..personals were decent and were making there mark..punchlines were good and were really hitten...flow was good and it was at a steadty pass...overall i gotta give this battle to you nice battle and you won

bcdynamic..
damn you keep impressing me you really changed alot and thats a good thing you dont do those paragraphs no more.. and i really like that..punchlines were decent but they were really weak at times...personals also weak...multies...again weak...
overall your verse was weak but you really improvable..

vote=economics
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Old 06-26-04, 03:46 AM   #10
Introspect.
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yeah ima go wit econmics on this one his punches were hitin harder but the other guy's were aight improvein fa sho flow goes to eco vocab goes to eco humor goes to niether yo i voted here eco go drop a vote on my battle wit this guy and my battle wit andu09 pc
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Old 06-26-04, 03:54 AM   #11
Magic5
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Economics
structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a lil because of the stretched lines...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good...

bcdynamic
structure was wack...ur lines started out stretched as hell, then u took them to where they were to simple...flow fell off a lot because ur structure was so wack...no metas...wordplay is ok...a few of ur punches connected...attempted personal, didnt connect...

Overall
Economics had the better structure...the better flow...more metas...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...he gets my vote...

VOTE - ECONOMICS

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Old 06-26-04, 05:03 AM   #12
Drastic
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From: FLA
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this was a good battle yall close to each otha i had to reread these verses to really vote but i had to give it to economics becuz his punches were harder and made more sence bcdynamic came off too plain in his flow both can elevate and expand vocab holla

vote-economics
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Old 06-26-04, 10:11 PM   #13
Plutonium
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thanks for the votes yo, uppin for more votes........
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Old 06-27-04, 01:33 AM   #14
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flows:dcdynamic
vocab:economics
punches:economics
personalls:economics
overall:economics
 
 


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