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06-30-04, 10:20 PM
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sought to see
IP:
yea i write some poetry too.. i know this is kinda short tho
you watching me? from up above ya outta be to prove your love you sought to see i had to be shown i caught ur plee i cant do this alone |
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06-30-04, 10:33 PM
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#2
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Light Weight
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IP:
damn short but to da point...good poem...liked it...give dat a 8/10
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06-30-04, 11:18 PM
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Jumpin' Along
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IP:
short and simple
straight to the point ..pretty good
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07-01-04, 08:36 PM
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IP:
I didn't like this too much, it's more along the lines of prose. Poetry expresses emotion and description. Emotion, this poem has. The latter, cero.
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07-02-04, 03:17 AM
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fuck you its more of a cry out to my dead father but fuck him n fuck you.. i hope your pussy is loose |
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07-02-04, 11:49 AM
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yawn
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IP:
..haha. Well, it was short... It sounded like those poems that they were reading on VH-1 from Jewels book...too short, and a little blah. Miss lyricist was right, no matter if you like it or not
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07-02-04, 06:55 PM
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IP:
yea it was short
ROFL^ on that loose pussy remark.. lmao...... dont speak to women like that ...
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07-02-04, 08:23 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP:
short as hell for that I can't judge this drop accurately...
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07-02-04, 10:39 PM
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IP:
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sall good.. and ill treat hoes how i want so step |
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