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A.K.A. | 5 | 71.43% | |
Unfortunate | 2 | 28.57% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-01-04, 08:59 PM | #1 | |
Banned: Cheating
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Battle: A.k.a. Vs Unfortunate
IP: BD49 3B1E
yo 10-12 lines ripit
no crew,hate,or dr votes
you spit first |
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07-01-04, 09:10 PM | #2 | |
you gotta hear me again
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IP: 7307 E652
ayo checking in and if i'm wasting my time on your weak ass then you better spit after me and not run like a bitch(we are no you are)
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07-01-04, 09:16 PM | #3 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BD49 3B1E
yo you need to get my name off yo shit casuse its weak fake ass im here to check so shut the fuck up and just get busted
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07-01-04, 10:20 PM | #4 | |
you gotta hear me again
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IP: 7307 E652
this cat was laughing at my record but he hide his cause it so pitiful//
i drag this cat throught the wood with no head on cause i'm just that sinacol// my dick is like nicateen cause you can't get off no matter how hard you try// i let you no that after battle me this kid is gonna ask why// i fuck this kids mom and she did even care that i killed him she was like how unfortunate// see if you gonna battle me then later thats what you gonna resent// way to go you rep the willow oh what where thatt never heard of it// i spit this hot shit so this dude gonna be a banana and split// this cat is all talk like a rapper but he ain't got no skill// call me a rollar coster cause i'm give you a thill// this battle is over and done before you even rap// look i'm done rapping against newbs that just spit crap//
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07-01-04, 11:50 PM | #5 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BD49 3B1E
yo yo yo checkin in this shit was quic so here it is now lets get some votes drop your links here to your battles and will repay the favor
yo look i aint in your crew so take me out, twisted goverment is dead go book a ticket to get in my crew scout, you a hoe so give me head you better get inspected before u get infected by the rhymes i hit big lip nigga thowing down signs hold on i got to eat ur sisters clit getting your ass beat by a newb like a bitch so put on this skirt representin the gs your like a groupie,dump yo ass in a pile of dirt your drowning in a pool of your own blood dont yell cause you wont be hurd no one likes u so dont think anyone cares when u die nigga thats just absurd critical this to battle beneficial to the site ill beat you ne day take this fake ass easy e away ill rip him like some paper mache |
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07-01-04, 11:54 PM | #6 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BD49 3B1E
yo i fucked up i forgot to put this 2 lines down
yo look i aint in your crew so take me out, twisted goverment is dead go book a ticket to get in my crew scout, you a hoe so give me head you better get inspected before u get infected by the rhymes i hit big lip nigga thowing down signs hold on i got to eat ur sisters clit getting your ass beat by a newb like a bitch so put on this skirt representin the gs your like a groupie,dump yo ass in a pile of dirt your drowning in a pool of your own blood dont yell cause you wont be hurd no one likes u so dont think anyone cares when u die nigga thats just absurd i bomb yo ass worse then usa did russia, sittin in dispair they just threw rocks load the ak-47 im getting ready to kill you, your last word are i love the cocks critical this to battle beneficial to the site ill beat you ne day take this fake ass easy e away ill rip him like some paper mache |
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07-01-04, 11:55 PM | #7 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BD49 3B1E
lets get this uppin for votes drop a link to your battle will repay the favor just vote first and the part about russia is cause hes from their
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07-02-04, 12:31 PM | #8 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BD49 3B1E
aka got ripped by his own hed of defence lmfao u suk
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07-02-04, 01:37 PM | #9 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BD49 3B1E
uppin for votes lets get some votes in here
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07-02-04, 01:42 PM | #10 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: B90F 540D
Punches-Unfortunate
Personals-Tie (AKA played of unfortunates name and Unf. delivered a crew punch) Flow-Unfortunate Opener-Tie...both decent Closer-Unfortunate....AKA's was too simplistic Overall-Unfortunate Close battle tho....decent shit from both ya's....keep at it can ya'll drop votes on these battle threads plz....peace http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132614 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132724 |
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07-09-04, 08:16 PM | #11 | |
If thats what you thought
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IP: D35B 3F85
opener AKA
Personals Unfortunate Multies Nobody Vocab AKA Wordplay Unfortunate Structure Nobody Punches Aka Closer Aka Aka- need to work on structure and spelling so us readers can understand more. I see potential...you need stronger punches and reword them to get the full effect. no multies that I saw. also come with some personals...some good ones. An okay verse Unfortunate- you need to work on structure as well. I noticed that you tried to come with punches I mean alot of them...but some didnt make sense do you feel me I think a lot of others will think same. no multies. You You were more on the personal side I thought .... V/Aka close battle though
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07-09-04, 10:42 PM | #12 | |
Jumpin' Along
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IP: C56C 93CC
this was a very close battle but i really think aka .. got this one ..
this cat was laughing at my record but he hide his cause it so pitiful// i drag this cat throught the wood with no head on cause i'm just that sinacol// lol... first line was hot but the second was alittle played my dick is like nicateen cause you can't get off no matter how hard you try// i let you no that after battle me this kid is gonna ask why// Naw not really feelin that line ..one of your weakest i fuck this kids mom and she did even care that i killed him she was like how unfortunate// see if you gonna battle me then later thats what you gonna resent// decent line but the moma part was good in like 3 grade way to go you rep the willow oh what where thatt never heard of it// i spit this hot shit so this dude gonna be a banana and split// lol... pretty played but good this cat is all talk like a rapper but he ain't got no skill// call me a rollar coster cause i'm give you a thill// okay decent ..but simple this battle is over and done before you even rap// look i'm done rapping against newbs that just spit crap// lol iight decent closer unfortunate yo look i aint in your crew so take me out, twisted goverment is dead go book a ticket to get in my crew scout, you a hoe so give me head Hell naw the first line was dope but the second was wack you better get inspected before u get infected by the rhymes i hit big lip nigga thowing down signs hold on i got to eat ur sisters clit naw wack line wasnt really feelin that getting your ass beat by a newb like a bitch so put on this skirt representin the gs your like a groupie,dump yo ass in a pile of dirt decent your drowning in a pool of your own blood dont yell cause you wont be hurd no one likes u so dont think anyone cares when u die nigga thats just absurd lol...decent line probably one of your best i bomb yo ass worse then usa did russia, sittin in dispair they just threw rocks load the ak-47 im getting ready to kill you, your last word are i love the cocks naw that was pretty played out already critical this to battle beneficial to the site ill beat you ne day take this fake ass easy e away ill rip him like some paper mache decent closer opener:tie Personals Unfortunate Multies:none Vocab AKA Wordplay Unfortunate Structure:none Punches:aka Closer:aka vote=aka just barely
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07-09-04, 11:22 PM | #13 | |
you gotta hear me again
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IP: C1DA C961
uppin and tell me what the hell kind of vote was that the one the dj lightwieght did.
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07-10-04, 05:57 PM | #14 | |
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
really close battle
aka you need serious help work or anything u can get on ya structure you had fair punches and you beat him in that match up.. u had ok opersonalz...overall 6.7/10 unfortanate.. you hd slightly better strucutre but you lacked vocab.. you guyz are batteling very newbish and need to fix it.. bottom line..your punches didnt hit quite as hard as aka's and thats why you lost overall 6.4/10 vote aka.. by the hair on his nutz
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07-10-04, 06:14 PM | #15 |
Paris Hilton Gone Crip
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
super close battle
A.K.A: Structure: 5/10 Flow: 6/10 Openor: 6/10 Closer: 6/10 Punches: 5/10 Personals: 6.5/10 Overall: 34.5/50 Unfortunate: Structure: 6/10 Flow: 5/10 Openor: 6/10 Closer: 6/10 Punches: 6/10 Personals: 5/10 Overall: 34/50 Vote: AKA
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