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06-26-04, 12:43 AM
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Mag... vs Marvelis
IP: C56C 93CC
ya know the deal 10 lines due in 30 mintues goodluck
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06-26-04, 12:44 AM
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IP: C56C 93CC
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06-26-04, 12:44 AM
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ok.........
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06-26-04, 01:00 AM
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yo yo this kid need jesus
this kid forgot he's battling da marvelis one i'm bringing the big toys and the boys when you come through you better be ready for war settle the score leave your head on the floor i'm the america's most wanted i'm like the D.C sniper pickin this nigga like i'm picking my shoes your walkin around like it;s the time of the season is it a reasen for you to be breathen i'm leaving you on resperating i let my doggs eat you later all right it's a wrap 1
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06-26-04, 01:03 AM
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IP: C56C 93CC
when this-bitch-is in the ring, just like ALI he "Shakes-and-Twit-ches!!...
cuz I hacked into the system and Im "Eras-in-Glit-ches"... Leave you Laced-in-Stitches, cuz I'll take-you-bitches, knock you "BACK TO THE FUTURE" like "FADED-Pic-tures!!!"... Now the stage-has-flipped, Im firing bullets that'll graze-ya-lips... M's ass has been pounded so many times, he has to "GLAZE-HIS-SHIT!"... He's used to getting beat, that why he he "CRAVES-the-WHIP"... At his job at "Chip and Dales" they make HIM "PAY-TO-STRIP!"... cause "Going DoggyStyle With Jesus" is the only time he Bends-My-Crosses.. cause your "Skill Aint Showing Up" like our Wins-And-Losses.. even if u were a "Hot Gurl Writing Your Raps" u still couldnt Rhyme-Fine.. u can "Put Clocks On The Stars" and it still wont be your Time-To-Shine.. ill "Have Sex With Your Ear" just so I can literally tell u fuk-What-U-Heard.. cause I got "Tion Coming Out Last" like at the End-Of-A-Word..
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06-26-04, 01:07 AM
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IP: B665 FC8D
[QUOTE=Marvelis]yo yo this kid need jesus
this kid forgot he's battling da marvelis one i'm bringing the big toys and the boys when you come through you better be ready for war settle the score leave your head on the floor i'm the america's most wanted i'm like the D.C sniper pickin this nigga like i'm picking my shoes next time i'm goin to beat this kid like he's my slave
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06-26-04, 01:11 AM
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IP: B665 FC8D
my b the first one is it the last one is a fuck up ok my bad
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06-26-04, 01:38 AM
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IP: C56C 93CC
w/e son its all good can we get some votes on this please
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06-26-04, 03:28 AM
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IP: C56C 93CC
uppin again please we need some votes will return the favor
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06-26-04, 03:49 AM
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Mag got this one totally by like a mile, he had a better structure and harder hitting punches, and nice personals:
Now the stage-has-flipped, Im firing bullets that'll graze-ya-lips... M's ass has been pounded so many times, he has to "GLAZE-HIS-SHIT!"... He's used to getting beat, that why he he "CRAVES-the-WHIP"... At his job at "Chip and Dales" they make HIM "PAY-TO-STRIP!"... the above are just some of nice punches by mag Marvelis's verse was terrible! it doesn't even rhyme! horrible structure and flow, that's the end of that, no hate here, but you can't compare marvelis's verse with mag..'s vote: Mag..
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06-26-04, 04:08 AM
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
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structure was simple as hell...flow fell off a little...a few metas...wordplay was simple and wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... Mag.. structure was ok...some of the lines seemed stretched though...flow fell off a lil due the stretchness...metas were tight...wordplay was tight...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall neither had good personals...neither had a stable flow...mag had the better structure...mag had more, and better metas...as well as wordplay...mag also had more connecting punches...so basing off of that..mag gets my vote... VOTE - MAG... PLEASE return the favor on the link in my sig... |
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06-26-04, 04:27 AM
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IP: 9588 E886
Yo 4 real Mag just unleashed, i like his flow and shit, hes gotta watch his lines though, some of them went a little long but other than that it was a slaughter, his lyrics were deep as fuck.....holla and vote on my battles to bro help a nigga out
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06-26-04, 04:41 AM
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yo this battle was close but id give this one to mag becuz his punches toward tha end hit hard but mag u started off shaky i thought marvelis had u and that wouldve been sad dun but tha last three bars got u my vote marvelis u need to check out tha tutorials for real read a couple of em and elevate befo u battle sum one like mag holla
vote-mag
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06-26-04, 05:00 AM
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IP: E63C BFED
mag killed this one, marvelous was ritin lines that was too short and some parts of it didnt make sense. marvelous, u aint too bad, but mag got this. his lines were more complex and i understood em all.
my vote goes to mag Repay the favor MC AK vs. olkingkole 1-0 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131672
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