I'm new and juss tryin' to get better at writing so plz tell me wut you think and wut I can do or need to do to get better.


Itz dat highly contagious tha one known as Mr. amazing/
I can bring tha drama to face hatin' niggaz mad cuz I'm str8 laced/
I'm tha one like Neal but I destroy tha Matrix in a whip wit 22's to skate wit/
My flowz sick like a piranha trust worthy like a honda my skillz go far beyond ya/
I'm bringin' tha pain got ya holleren my name T-Bo has done it again/
A hollow tip gangsta U can't fuck wit me tha type of nigga you don't wanna make ya enemy/
Like Ric Roc I drop trax dat are hot I'm a young Doug E. Fresh tha new Human beat box/
I Bill Gates my enemies tha type to take over ya bloc and then destroy it to up my stock/
Look apon a star and make a wish dat maybe one dat U can be as good as dis/
Even before rap I wuz makin' moves everday checkin' my to do list cuz tha streetz iz tha streetz and business iz business/

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If she got got 4 fingerz up wit twisted in tha middle then shez a Westside lady
If He got 4 fingerz up wit twisted in tha middle then he's a Westside Baby