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LethalNJection 5 100.00%
HMP 0 0%
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Old 07-10-04, 01:54 AM   #1
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Lethal vs hmp

IP: 5867 FD83

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Old 07-10-04, 01:55 AM   #2
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From: Crip City
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.................................

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...........check...........

........good luck..........
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Old 07-10-04, 01:57 AM   #3
HMP
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check, key
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Old 07-10-04, 02:28 AM   #4
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From: Crip City
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You're a hoe, a joke, so by now you should be used to getting laughed at...
you could carry brass knuckles and your punches still wouldn't pack Jack...
I'm about to make an example out of you kid, call this an all-out assault...
mighty talk won't do nothing but, place you on the sidewalk traced in chalk...
You couldn't pay me enough to go easy on you so you could out top me...
You'll never out top me and I'll prove it when they perform your autopsy...
I split crooks wit shit books, hang em' out to dry on fish hooks..
Rip their flesh from the bone,take pictures and ask my next challenger how this looks...
You ain't shit rook(ie),fingering animals doesn't make you enough of a vet to test me..
There ain't no such thing as chest protection, I'll make your vest bleed...
you're the best, leave! Cause,giving blow jobs is the only way you'll suck-seed
If we ever meet i'll tell you "fuck you" but,I don't want to give you the impression to fuck me

quick key good luck
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Old 07-10-04, 02:45 AM   #5
HMP
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(starts off slow)
they say we're all here for a sebliminal purpose...
...some govern churches, some live worthless lives under the surface. /1
my job, sentence and reason will bring murder to season...
...simply appeasing gods will to treason this life with a soul beatin. /2

(things pick up, as thoughts of life and death shoot through my mind)
the systems persistant, yet your blatant to risk it.
lifes like expenses, spent on the clock and its not water resistant.
call lethal R Kelly's assistant, the millitant of elementry sex interests.
my wills blunt yet precise, lethal take my advise.
not a price could realize the size of debt that contrasts to Jay-z's ice.


unfineshed verse. blah
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Old 07-10-04, 03:09 AM   #6
Paris Hilton666
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this was an okay battle not the best I every seen

Openor: HMP
Structure: Lethal
Flow: Tie
Personals: HMP
Punches: Lethal
Enjoyed: Lethal
Vote: Lethal

Good shit but I was feelin lethal more on this one
Closer: Tie
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Old 07-10-04, 03:21 AM   #7
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LethalNJection
structure is good...flow is on target...u had nice metas...wordplay was tight...most of ur punches connected...no personals...

HMP
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...u had alright personals...

Overall
HMP had more personals...both had a good structure...as well as a solid flow...LethalNJection had more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...LethalNJection gets my vote...

VOTE - LETHALNJECTION

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Old 07-10-04, 03:23 AM   #8
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This was a pretty good battle. I liked HMp's opener cuz it was kinda creative but didnt have a punch or personal in it. But it was still tite. I think Njection took this because he had better and hard hitting punches. He also had a good flow to his structure. HMP dint have many punches in his verse...but I still liked it...it was koo..

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Old 07-10-04, 03:59 AM   #9
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thank you will return the favor uppin
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Old 07-10-04, 03:39 PM   #10
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Opener:Both...
Structure: Lethal...
Flow:Both...
Personals: iam say HMP...
Punches: Lethal...
Enjoyed: Lethal...
Vote: Lethal...
Overall lethal got this battle with punches and his verse was much better....

V/LethalNJection
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Old 07-10-04, 04:29 PM   #11
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Opener:Both...
Structure: both
Flow: Both
Personals: lethal
Punches: Lethal
Enjoyed: Lethal
Vote: Lethal
ayo it was a waste of time this shit is easy to tell who won
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Old 07-10-04, 04:29 PM   #12
shadow
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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lethal:
your flow was really good. with nice strucutre and wordplay...
it was really of tha hook...one of the best verses i seen from you
good punches and personalz and you used the fact that he's
a rookie against him..it worked out nice ovrall *8*

mbp
you had nice flow witch was caused by your exelent use of multies..
you had good rhyming and evrything.. with complex vocab..
but you didint throw enough punches
lethal in jectionz just came harder with punches..
thats why he won...
my vote lethal
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