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07-17-04, 05:23 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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Hard Times
IP: 3240 794D
MAN IM DEAD BROKE FUKIN WIT DISS GHETTO LIFE
CANT GO NO WHERE NIGGA WANNA B SHOOTIN AT NITE SO I WATCH MY LIFE FLY BY JUST STARIN OUT A WINDOW WAY 2 SIK AND TIRED OF PLAYIN DAT DAMN NINTENDO OR PS2,XBOX DAT SAME SHIT GIVE ME A BATTLE DAWG DA MONEY I NEED IT BELIEVE IT NIGGA TRYIN ROB ME WHEN SELL BRIKS SO SPIT AND NOT A FREESTYLE I MEAN BULLETS AND DISS IS KAUSIN ME TO GO DOWN DA PATH A DEATH IM GIVIN IT ALL I GOT BUT I AINT GOT NUTTIN LEFT MY HARD TIMES IS BRINGIN ME DOWN WHERE I KANT GET UP I SPIT KUZ DA FACT I HIT ROK BOTTOM MAKES ME WANNA GET UP BUT DA STRUGGLE IS 2 HARD NOW IM IN A PRISON YARD WAITIN 2 MY TIMES UP DAMN LIFE IS WAY 2 HARD  |
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07-17-04, 05:32 PM
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Heavy Lies The Crown
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IP: 8A1D B942
pretty weak to me stayted on subject at hand but ya grammer is weak ya bars aint got nothin that stands out in em simple rhymes the scheme off it was lost more then kids on milkboxes
elevate 3/10
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07-17-04, 05:35 PM
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Jumpin' Along
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IP: C56C 93CC
damn that was weak but what can i expect from a newb
it had weak flow... the structure was off at times..and the rhymes were pretty simple overall weak .. but okay... please return the favor in a open mic in my sig
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