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LethalNjection Drunk, out of school, sitting in prison; wasn't pretty Things finally looking up, back to the books and now i'm Dirty Homie hurry, on my way, a warrior everyday Worry weighing my brain praying the warrior would stay He by her side when grandma died, like a rock you took the pain I feel outside, ain't lending aid, simply looking through the pane In my mind i see you dying, high as when you flew a plane They set the rules, you knew the game, and still refused to play Cancer can take your life, but fuck it, while alive do it your way The story, of a man beat to his knees that still stands Horrid alcoholic, quit cold, stuck through, a real man What i want to be, damn, steel soul, soft heart Extending helping hands going through your own rough parts Malignant in silence, building up our tolerance Learning little by bits on how the hours commence It's your power convincing me never to quit For ever i live, i now know power is life Grown from cowardice nights, and now we are light I tried to cry when i heard Unc., it seemed only right But like my dad i had learned from it, your deeds showed me fight And now a model of life developed springing to bloom Fuck clinging to gloom, you'd want me singing to you So that's what i'll do, be it 3 months or a year Just for you i'll be as strong as you as long as you here
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IP: C56C 93CC
uppin for some feed back please.......
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IP: 6335 AF01
nice dawg, I was feelin the flow and the vocab. change, nice man.
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IP: C56C 93CC
lol^^thankz can i get some more feed back on this thank you
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IP: 3240 794D
yea...i was feelin the flow. nice wordplay 2...nice spit
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IP: C56C 93CC
thankz man can i get some morem fed back on this please
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IP: C56C 93CC
uppin for some more feed back on this please.......
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
nice shit good flow good play overall nice open mic 8/10 pc dawg
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IP: F04B 70DC
damnn yo the vocab and everything was tyt man keep it up
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IP: F04B 70DC
i would rate ya spit a 10 MAYN its tyt no doubt man
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IP: C56C 93CC
^^thankz for the feed back..can I get some more please...
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IP: 7139 D3F4
damn hot spit.good wordplay and original.9/10.your flow was good and your structure was near perfection
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IP: C56C 93CC
thank you.. uppin for some more feed
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uppin on this one .....
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IP: EC0B 84C7
that was cool dawg nice work
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