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08-22-04, 11:26 AM
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i'M THE PUNCHLINE KING
IP:
Even as a teacher you couldn’t be a creature with knowledge
Your feature is garbage so why seek leisure in college? Not clever and firm you’ll never learn to rhyme Rhymes not true bloom why you assume you can rap? Stand and yap junk you crap punk, say what you sees land on map? Can’t navigate ship or elevate in script you float a boat With no hope that’s sinking and stinking like a Titanic joke You pretend you ill but your blend don’t kill whack trend don’t fill hope you spill dope like and addict you lack dividends you appear false clear across the globe where your black river end? Hinder success please surrender don’t impress even with a blender Couldn’t mix best, couldn’t fix a nest of bees with honey and its tender |
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08-22-04, 01:03 PM
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Banned
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not the best punches i've seen but there not bad....
we should have a punch-line battle..... but decent... |
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08-22-04, 02:15 PM
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its aight dawg elavate `
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DUn duN dUn....... |
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08-22-04, 03:28 PM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
to be honest thos are wack punches ive got better and ive seen better but yer flow was better: (no hate)
flow: 6/10 punches: 3/10 elavate metphores:1/10 vocab: 6/10 overall man i got no clue (no hate) |
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08-22-04, 09:03 PM
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IP:
punches are weak...seriously...and your structure looks kinda messed...usually cats have one style of writing multis and yours was a mess...to be honest looked like you just robbed some lines and threw them all together...whatever tho....
kings always get dethroned...
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i only listen to your shit to remind me what not to do--tonedeff |
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08-23-04, 09:34 AM
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IP:
thanks for the critique and feedback yall
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08-23-04, 09:51 AM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
well man sense you've been on this site sense june man you arent that good you should be better you need to elavate bad
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08-23-04, 10:42 AM
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IP:
BrOTheRP.A.R.A. show me where I need to elevate thanks for responding doe
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08-23-04, 12:00 PM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
do you know what doe is use the word in a porper sentece or dont use it but go elavate fuck i dont kno ask someone
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08-23-04, 12:16 PM
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IP:
BrOTheRP.A.R.A. thanks for responding but don't pay attention to others read and interpret what you see and right now you see vicious punch lines dawg HA! HA! HA!
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08-23-04, 12:18 PM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
ok then hoe cake
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08-23-04, 04:31 PM
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IP:
come on man these punchlines is knocking bitches out dawg
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08-23-04, 04:35 PM
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IP:
i aint gone lie they nice, BUT they aint the best shit i ever herd
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Epademik is a gentleman's gangsta, and a gangsta's gentleman.
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08-23-04, 08:24 PM
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IP:
Epademik thanks for the props for real dawg these other cats wanna start something up in here up in here dawg
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