ballistic charateristics, u saw, but u missed it//
images twisted, eye of beholder, optic linguistic//
blurred vision, physics... drifted a relative velocity//
probably let her go, under pressure like viscosity//
sumthing prompted me, casually approach cautiously//
invade the proximity, her fragrance such divinity//
wats got into me, but I proceed, courtship I anticipate//
suggested and supplicate, so we can formally fornicate//
I pose to form her fate, she back away played complex//
hard to get, so vex, but I continue to conquer concepts//
so obvious, we progressed dialougue like recycled objects//
back and forth process until we agreed on lyrical logic//
one less than octives, she encryted numerical scriptures//
stuck like fixtures, I reigned a victorious victor//

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Lyrical Rapsody

I jus freestyled this real quick... I kinda like it, tell me wat ya think

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Lyrical Rapsody

lots of big word i like

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

hahhaahaha, goodlook Big.... lookin for more feedback, wat ya'll think

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Lyrical Rapsody

This is what I like seein a fuckin ill verse man/
Wordplay and multis were on point, helpin you make the flow good/
Good imagery in the verse too man, that was a very ill piece/
There isnt much you have to work on/
You got wordplay,multis, flow, and structure down/
Coulda been longer, I give it a 9/10 man/
Keep elevatin/

i got to give it up to you, u did well. . . keep it up
try experimentin wid less complex stlyes jus see how it comes out, jus a suggestion.. . . u might like it.
but still i like what ur doin already. . .

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NG stuntman. . .

whatchu' talkin' 'bout? ? ?

Welcome To The New Generation . . .

"Put A Sock In It. . . With Your Fake Ass Tupac Image!"

thanx peeps, goodlook on the feedback.....

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Lyrical Rapsody