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Old 10-20-04, 08:28 AM   #1
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Who remembers the first shyt the wrote and what it was about?

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I was in middle school and my boy wanted to talk to this girl who happened to be like the most popular chick in the school. So i sent her a little message and shyt saying my boy wanted to holler at her... She practically laughed in his face... so ya know, i had to bring her ass back down to Earth... I wrote this joint called "A Bad Smell" that was patterened after Run D.M.C.'s "Big Mouth"... it was the worst shyt i ever wrote in my life!!! somehow i lost my rhyme book and little did I know that the shyt had circulated all over the whole school! She was crying and shyt... it was beautiful... and then the most popular dude in the school rolled up on me...lol... needless to say, i was quite the herb in my younger years and got picked on a lot back then, so I just knew I was about to get my ass whipped! He asked me if I wrote it... i was gonna say no but I got real bold and said yeah...lol... dude said the shyt was "fresh"...lol... he gave me back my book, told me he rhymed too, and said I was better than him... I been rapping ever since...
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Old 10-20-04, 08:36 AM   #2
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lol dat shyt is hilarious how did she end up finding out
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Old 10-20-04, 08:40 AM   #3
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somebody either told her about it or showed it to her... she really became a cool person after that... I helped her to become a better person by accident...lol
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Old 10-20-04, 09:58 AM   #4
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LOL ... i remember an old thread like this... calamitys one stuck in my brain.. lmao

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I dunno why i still remember that ...
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Old 10-20-04, 02:33 PM   #5
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i wrote it about a girl ta i broke up with that i didnt want her to see but her best friend was sitting next to me read t n told her but we were cool till she rated on me and i kicked out of school fuckin cunt
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Old 10-20-04, 06:12 PM   #6
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ha ha. funny stuff. the first time i wrote was when my homey got played so i wrote about 20 something barz jus clownin him. and like ill gramatix said it got circulated throughout the school. it was pretty funny. thats how i started. jus makin fun of people............
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Old 10-22-04, 07:56 AM   #7
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Im not sure but i think it was about school....man i hated that shit......just had to write about it.....
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Old 10-22-04, 08:02 AM   #8
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my first shit was about a year ago, when i was in 7th.

it was just after my lowest point, depression, drugs, alcahol.

it was entitled "Fuckin Crazy"

my friends loved it, i hated it, so i trashed it.

it was about everything i had gone thru that year, with bullies, and ^^^
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Old 10-22-04, 04:04 PM   #9
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In Primary school when we was meant to do a poem but I co-wrote a rap with a friend, Michael about the human racemostly killed words for rhymes but had meaning short as fuck tho.
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Old 10-23-04, 02:40 PM   #10
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i wrote sumthin wen one of my friends got rejected and shit, and he made fun of me, so i did it back............ i unno, i cant even really remember........ the first time i wrote a song it was on that Victory beat and shit was ok...... juss self-glorification
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Old 10-23-04, 03:01 PM   #11
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First shit I wrote I was like 12, It was some gangsta shit lol
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Old 10-24-04, 03:18 PM   #12
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i mean, ive been writing shit since, o, i dunno..... 2nd grade or so.

but my real "gangsta" shit came just last year
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Old 10-24-04, 03:52 PM   #13
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1st shit I wrote

was back when jay-z

"Hard Knock Life" 1st came out

I loved that shit,s I wrote a song called

"Occur"

was about all the shit that happens...

People said I suck and should quit rappen

Well I didn' now look how good I am...

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Old 10-24-04, 04:58 PM   #14
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i couldn't find the first thing i wrote but i found the second....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=121390
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Old 10-24-04, 08:29 PM   #15
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girl pissed me off, i freestyled bout, and she hears bout it and i thought i wuz screwed. reported it to teacher, teacher didnt believe her since i wuz like 12, but i got respect from people for it
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