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Check in by: 08-01-04 at 03:04 AM

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EmerginMc07 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 02:21 AM.

so u wana battle iite its yo loss,
im a rebel witout a cause,
i dont evn wana see da words that wud cum outa ya mouth,
dis is guna b like a old tyson fite 1 round knock out,
ur scared ur dick is leakin,
ur nervous ur knees r shakin ur hairlines receadin,
wana no y im on dis website cause im good at mistreatin,
i told yo ass b prepared to take a beatin,
u guna b behind in dis poll il always b leadin,
please dont rite back aint worth me readin,
afta dis u guna b fucked wit nuttin to say so ull start leavin,
leave yo email add n mayb ill send u a seasons greetin.

GEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 02:40 AM.

iite dawg u can go ahed n spit yo shit i alredy spit so go ahed n lite that shit up

yo man he dint goo im waitn but untill he does i ned sum votes dawg

Emergin, will need a surgeon, after I slaughter him ta slabs,
Your an MC?, more like Farnzworth Bentley, this ass rhymes weaker than Babs.
In the cypher, this bitch gets people sayin ta give me leeway,
I interrupt his weakass rhymes, and "merg-in" like tha freeway.
He spits flatter than "drivers licenses"...Bitch...elevate ya lines,
I "spit" "laminating" fluid all ova ya face, so you can suffiocate by mah rhymes.
Callin me out is like bringin back a late library book...pay ya dues,
the only way he gets his posts up is by tryin out for all the crews!
Chi-Town huh, I've heard that story already,
I know what cats do in that city reflected off R. Kelly.
Wearin pink, and makin porno flicks I seen,
but the chicks in the flicks, aint even sixteen!
I see you on the threads, suckin up ta all the illest clicks,
he "dickrides and votes" more than "prostitutes into politics."

Read it carefully, and youll get it.

And we UP.

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Voted For: GEE


Emerg- Flow Was A Little Off, Punches Didnt Connect Well, Structure Was All Over The Place..

Gee- Punches Connected Better, Flow Was Better, Structure Was Better, Wordplay Was Better And Verse Was More Original

Punches- Gee
Flow- Gee
Personals- Niether
Wordplay- Gee
Metas- Niether
Structure- Gee
Originality- Gee

Final Vote- Gee

This Battle Was One Sided, Gee Came Harder And Better In All Aspects...

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Voted For: GEE

Gee

Emergin, will need a surgeon, after I slaughter him ta slabs,
Your an MC?, more like Farnzworth Bentley, this ass rhymes weaker than Babs.
~Decent punch, structures a little off 7/10
In the cypher, this bitch gets people sayin ta give me leeway,
I interrupt his weakass rhymes, and "merg-in" like tha freeway.
~Not really a punch...kinda just fillin in lines 4/10
He spits flatter than "drivers licenses"...Bitch...elevate ya lines,
I "spit" "laminating" fluid all ova ya face, so you can suffiocate by mah rhymes.
~Decent punch, could of been better, but okay 7/10
Callin me out is like bringin back a late library book...pay ya dues,
the only way he gets his posts up is by tryin out for all the crews!
~haha A good punch with a touch of a personal 7/10
Chi-Town huh, I've heard that story already,
I know what cats do in that city reflected off R. Kelly.
~Eh, didnt really like it..but at least attempted personal 6/10
Wearin pink, and makin porno flicks I seen,
but the chicks in the flicks, aint even sixteen!
~Filler 4/10
I see you on the threads, suckin up ta all the illest clicks,
he "dickrides and votes" more than "prostitutes into politics."
~haha nice punch/personal with good wordplay 8/10

Gee=43/70

Emergin

so u wana battle iite its yo loss,
im a rebel witout a cause,
~Weak Opener, no punch, personal..anything 2/10
i dont evn wana see da words that wud cum outa ya mouth,
dis is guna b like a old tyson fite 1 round knock out,
~Attemped punch that didnt connect 5/10
ur scared ur dick is leakin,
ur nervous ur knees r shakin ur hairlines receadin,
~Weak....no punch..no nothin... 2/10
wana no y im on dis website cause im good at mistreatin,
i told yo ass b prepared to take a beatin,
~Weak...self glorification...no punch 1/10
u guna b behind in dis poll il always b leadin,
please dont rite back aint worth me readin,
~Weak...nothing...elevate man 2/10
afta dis u guna b fucked wit nuttin to say so ull start leavin,
leave yo email add n mayb ill send u a seasons greetin.
~Weak close..no punch...2/10

EmerginMC07=14/60...one word says it all...elevate..your whole drop was one big filler very pathetic

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Voted For: GEE

OKAY UMM DIS SHIT WAS ONE sided as fukk emerg ya verse was no where near gee shit dunny no hate true story..let me break down my vote tho

opener-gee...merg ya shit was da worst
structure-gee hands down
punchlines-gee hands down
creativity-gee
multis-nun
personals-nun
finisher-gee dat was a hott punch rite there
enjoyed-gee....merg ws no fukkin match in dis wun ya structure is nasty lol fix dat shit 4real or u gon lose everytime

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

Voted For: GEE

nice nice,,gee your verse was alot more complex with punches n you had some really original lines,dint much like your opener but thought your next 3 bars were sick..closer was good a bit weak in your verse in the middle but you took his hands dowen..nice job...emerg:your verse was ok but you had no wordplay n your punches were straight not alot of complexity in your verse good vocab..but ya come up short in this battle...http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106

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left...2 many herbs

Voted For: GEE

gee cuz he had nice flow and structure but a little stupid

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