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08-14-04, 07:07 PM
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Fuck Yall doing
IP: 78E6 F849
Yo i thought this site was a fuckin battle site where cats come from all over to perfect they artform?
If you wanna get some or show ya booty Yall can complain all ya but you aint gon' move me/ Yall tryin to find a spouse go to a love site- Round here real niggas lookin for them glove fights/ Some cats postin pics of hoes they aint got Im perfecting the flow for the dough I aint got/ This is not a diss-this is just my perspective So if you tryin to get paid i suggest you change ya directive/ This is the start of a collective Niggas Tryin to Succeed Cus basically yall gonna be the Niggas With no Need of a deal cus yall aint focused thats just the facts you can say fuck the wax but soon its gonna come back at ya and I'ma be there on top staring down at ya Bang
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08-14-04, 07:10 PM
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$Thug Life$
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nice shit
THIS IS NOT FEED BACK "NICE SHIT" IS NOT FEEDBACK LEAVE FEEDBACK ruff i'm warrning you. - Mask. Last edited by Masked : 08-14-04 at 07:24 PM. |
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08-14-04, 07:19 PM
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Keep elevating Pz.
Oh yeah leave a link to were you replied to bro.. leave the link here.
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08-14-04, 07:22 PM
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IP: 78E6 F849
Like Jigga said "its just my thoughts" . Although there aint no comparison now but thats where im trying to be feel me?
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08-14-04, 07:38 PM
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IP: 78E6 F849
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"You know I own the steal Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield" "We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body" |
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08-14-04, 11:47 PM
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IP: 78E6 F849
Can i get some feedback on this shit.
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"You know I own the steal Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield" "We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body" |
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08-16-04, 01:47 AM
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IP: 78E6 F849
Lookin for that feedback foreal man.
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"You know I own the steal Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield" "We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body" |
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08-16-04, 12:41 PM
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IP: 78E6 F849
Yo I need feedback im addicted to this shit.
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"You know I own the steal Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield" "We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body" |
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08-16-04, 12:44 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP: BA92 8DB7
I liked the use of repetition in "I ain't got"
hackneyed topic...and your imagery wasn't strong enough to rehash a commn theme decent rhyming...just up complexity 1 |
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08-17-04, 11:44 AM
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IP: 78E6 F849
word word aight. upppin for more feedback.
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08-17-04, 12:45 PM
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IP: AD41 912D
that shit was cool but with a name like bang come harder my nigga but all love.....1
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hey yo im known to play it low// dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio// ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes// my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised// faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1 |
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