Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 08:02 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Tupac8888 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 08:06 PM.

Checking in--!-- Goodluck--

--Tupac8888--
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

archieDX has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 08:07 PM.

This kid is wack--!--im for real--
The way he sucks at rap--!-- is my deal--
Shut up man--!-- Ill kill you--
Shoot you--!-- thats true--
I banged you mom--!-- it was good--
She even blowed me--!-- aka sucked my wood--

--Tupac8888--
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

fu(k this bitch made niggga/
perpetrating on the back of pac/
you either rep you own set or you can get a slap/
enough of the crap, its time to act right/
or you you just might, catch the first fist fight,/
want fame?/
i got the starlight!/
i shine bright, and the shine might/
dim some this dum-dum/
in the aftermath, i leave Red Rum/
I dare you to sip some,/
beat you down like a drum/
as i outlaw your fake war/
and then hit you up some/
swalllow five live shots/
and then we see who'll come/
you'll see/
but i know the sole survivor will be me/
cos the slugs's fit and all the drugs hits/
straight fu(king with your chi/

Voted For: archieDX

Damn, I don't mean to be come'n down on ya 8888 but that verse is way to short to get any votes. Archie you need to really work on comming up with better wordplay and flow but the punches that you had a few of em hit and they really got you this battle, Tupac try and battle people who maybe haven't battled before or much, it might help you out.


Can you guy's return the favour, honest votes only the link is in my sig at the bottom.

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Voted For: archieDX

pac no strture no puches no disses no vocab no personals you are quite possible the worst rapper ever.arc good struture and flow punches and vocab are lackin but not that bad as his still bad though but it dont take much to beat his verse

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AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

Voted For: Tupac8888

wtf,this was bad ya'll........pac gets it.....this was a FUCKED BATTLE

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I Dunno I Shouldnt've Voted But Fuck Da First Dint Make Sense The 2nd Was Straight Shit....no1 Should Win This........

Voted For: archieDX

Archie-Wack Structure which screwed with your flow..but you came with harder punches

Tupac-wack...wack...wack...no punches...played lines...crappy drop

V/Archie for at lest throwin punches

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DV8, some inadequate feedback there...you gotta give reasons for your vote bro

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Voted For: archieDX

Oh mah god. Both of you are fuckin horrible. Quit usin them parentheses as your "c" in fuCk. If i had ta pick, archie takes this with harder hittin punches. Tupac your shit is wack and I dont even know how youre gonna ever elevate. Listen to some Nas or real Tupac if you wanna learn somthin. Fuck that...your username got me mad takin pacs name and writin them bitch rhymes. Shit and this aint even a dickride neither. I dont need ta dickride ta no newbie. But I bet any of these otha rhymas could say the same thing about ur name and ur rhymes. Vote goes ta Archie for better punches and everythin else.

Vote-Archie

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Voted For: archieDX

he raps ike me and i respect dat much luv for archieDX

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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