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Check in by: 09-10-04 at 05:48 PM

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Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 05:49 PM.

Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 05:50 PM.

lyrically and physically my words send u to ya corner like a boxer
ya attempt to beat me will only have the heater red u like a lobster
like a deadly combinationn of hypnotic and vodka my lyrics are flammable
cops find ya body parts in a few different places but ya death's unexplainable
the only way ya spitting hot shit is if ya head is up my ass and u got an "anal-view" (i'm spiting hot shit)
Lyrics manifest inside ya body leave ya "brain-outta-wack"
get blasted with a pump the size of a poolstick like it "came-outta-shaq"
so u gonna run when the semi auto let's loose and attacks
doctors operate and find a few clips in ya back
lyrics getting hungry eat u like a midnight snack
the only time u hear clapping (gun shots) is when people applaud
bitch u prewrite ya shit which means ya a fraud
don't step to me i'll let the heater spray u down
red beams paint ya face like a birthday clown
lyrics slap u around like an abusive father
u know u gonna lose this battle so why bother
heater cut ya body open leave slits like gills
scare u so much have ya face turn whiter then ex pills
riding through ya hood i stop by ya house
looking for a quickie see ya girl slide up in her blouse
i'm hot so my fire can't be doused
have u rubbing sticks together to get hot like ya camping out
hands down u already know i'm the "vic-tor"
lyrics become legendary like a da vinci "pic-ture"
slug hit u like a truck u won't know what hit ya
coming up against me u better bring ya whole crew with ya
lyrics operate like a doctor cut ya body open
u my patient i'm an arson leave ya body smoking
but i'm tired of playing but i'm gonna end this "right-here"
and the winner of this battle is already "quite-clear"

yo yo time to rain on dis brer
yo yo yo.....

Battlin' Livin Legend, (hallaleuia), add 1 mo to da win record
Yo dis this Legend gon b LIVIN impotent n shook, cos his balls gonna b took
Neuture this dog,leave him limpin all da way home feelin robbed
Ma record aint impressive, i aint sressin'
Cos hes own pant hes messin', next 2 da PC countin' his blessin's
Ma rhymes are indelible, ma opposition is not formidable
Definently not credible, u winning? highly illogical
cos I b da realst of killaz, there are few who r iller
And its not u legend so step bak, or get twisted like nik naks
Beaten like eggs, if im lazy a simple 4 shots to tha head
u gettin frightened seeing apparitions, shook by ma lyrical composition
drowning in yo excrement,ur turning red wit embarrasement
A flyweight bout to go down to a lightweight, down outta sight
Its so easy as im battlin' a nigga wit no lyrical might
tha New York Kincks,....... unlike u dnt get ripped quick,
Every line is anuva vote, this shit aint nuttin but K.O
196posts to ur name, ur rhymes sound company made
Sorta like u spittin 4 fame, ashaming tha game
Kinda like puffy, oh well i'll spit "mase"
U best get duckin', or it'll hit u in tha face
U amuse niggaz wit fake ebonics, claimin ur rhymes r toxic
Only yo mama buys yo shit to rock wit, Brers buy ma rhymes simply cos dey legit
If I had time I bet I find ur rhymes on ohhla.com
Go thru ma sistas collection find ur shit on Backstreets cd-rom!

yo nik aks r Uk crisps dat r all twisted and shit.............ha ha livin legend u been bit no punches jus lyrical slef glorification and punches get mo den lyrics...but dis was a gd battle...u ever wanna go again jus holla at me...dnt 4get to up dis shit...all of y'all vote and vote in detail. Peace

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uppin dis y'all.............................................

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Voted For: Livin Legend

livin legend won this imo....

flow: livin
vocab: livin
complexity: elusiv
punches: livin by a lil
personals: elusiv
overall:livin

livin legend: 6/10
elusiv:5.5/10

this was a close battle both u cats can elevate tho.. props to both..

livin just work on personals and punches and youll be set...

elusiv u can work on punches and personals too dogg.. work on that flow too

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Voted For: Livin Legend

well u took it on word play alone, structure was good WAAAAAAAY TO LONG ha but i was feeli'n it,

punches, metas, personals, structure,wordplay:livin legend

some word play , some goood word choice jus work on ya rhym'n:elusiv g


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Voted For: Livin Legend

wasnt feelin this battle ... overall i think LL took this one ... some better punches and decent word-play ...

uppin

Voted For: Livin Legend

i vote for liven legend good battle for the most part

Elusiv g:

Battlin' Livin Legend, (hallaleuia), add 1 mo to da win record
Yo dis this Legend gon b LIVIN impotent n shook, cos his balls gonna b took
Neuture this dog,leave him limpin all da way home feelin robbed
Ma record aint impressive, i aint sressin'
Cos hes own pant hes messin', next 2 da PC countin' his blessin's
Ma rhymes are indelible, ma opposition is not formidable
Definently not credible, u winning? highly illogical
cos I b da realst of killaz, there are few who r iller
And its not u legend so step bak, or get twisted like nik naks
Beaten like eggs, if im lazy a simple 4 shots to tha head
u gettin frightened seeing apparitions, shook by ma lyrical composition
drowning in yo excrement,ur turning red wit embarrasement
A flyweight bout to go down to a lightweight, down outta sight
Its so easy as im battlin' a nigga wit no lyrical might
tha New York Kincks,....... unlike u dnt get ripped quick,
Every line is anuva vote, this shit aint nuttin but K.O
196posts to ur name, ur rhymes sound company made
Sorta like u spittin 4 fame, ashaming tha game
Kinda like puffy, oh well i'll spit "mase"
U best get duckin', or it'll hit u in tha face
U amuse niggaz wit fake ebonics, claimin ur rhymes r toxic
Only yo mama buys yo shit to rock wit, Brers buy ma rhymes simply cos dey legit
If I had time I bet I find ur rhymes on ohhla.com
Go thru ma sistas collection find ur shit on Backstreets cd-rom!

it was straight u could have had harder puches and a better structure (which alot of people need to work on) but other than that pretty solid flow i have to give you props

livin legend:

lyrically and physically my words send u to ya corner like a boxer
ya attempt to beat me will only have the heater red u like a lobster
like a deadly combinationn of hypnotic and vodka my lyrics are flammable
cops find ya body parts in a few different places but ya death's unexplainable
the only way ya spitting hot shit is if ya head is up my ass and u got an "anal-view" (i'm spiting hot shit)
Lyrics manifest inside ya body leave ya "brain-outta-wack"
get blasted with a pump the size of a poolstick like it "came-outta-shaq"
so u gonna run when the semi auto let's loose and attacks
doctors operate and find a few clips in ya back
lyrics getting hungry eat u like a midnight snack
the only time u hear clapping (gun shots) is when people applaud
bitch u prewrite ya shit which means ya a fraud
don't step to me i'll let the heater spray u down
red beams paint ya face like a birthday clown
lyrics slap u around like an abusive father
u know u gonna lose this battle so why bother
heater cut ya body open leave slits like gills
scare u so much have ya face turn whiter then ex pills
riding through ya hood i stop by ya house
looking for a quickie see ya girl slide up in her blouse
i'm hot so my fire can't be doused
have u rubbing sticks together to get hot like ya camping out
hands down u already know i'm the "vic-tor"
lyrics become legendary like a da vinci "pic-ture"
slug hit u like a truck u won't know what hit ya
coming up against me u better bring ya whole crew with ya
lyrics operate like a doctor cut ya body open
u my patient i'm an arson leave ya body smoking
but i'm tired of playing but i'm gonna end this "right-here"
and the winner of this battle is already "quite-clear"

pretty solid flow also i think u had a better structure for the most part and some of your punches were a little better close battle guys and a good one
~one xplicit

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