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Old 08-08-04, 10:10 PM   #1
SixX da FinisH
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Fuck All Yall!!!

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Chea lemme get at yall...

fuck beefin wit yall im str8 merkin u bytches
my trigger finger sleepy n im urkin to twitch-it
yall cats is weak so im endin ya spittin
im comin wit anvils n u only heavy as linen
ma crew some of the illest in the world, n still no deal
killin shyt rite in front of execs, yet they feel no skill
well fuck all yall cuz Owt Da Hood Productions is comin quick
cats sayin we aint never gonna make it, im lovin it
lemme get one verse against ya son, n i'll show ya tha truth
mad cuz u aint never gonna be in a studio booth

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Old 08-08-04, 11:42 PM   #2
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yo manyou had a nice flow and i liked your rhymin and i enjoyed readin it but need more wordplay
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Old 08-09-04, 12:03 AM   #3
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too short,need a better vocab...n some of it could've been written better...keep elevatin 6
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Old 08-09-04, 04:58 PM   #4
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Nice Rhymin but fo real ya need to work on what you sayin and all-what I mean is like ur vocab.....I'm with DV8 on that one....but its coo...
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Old 08-09-04, 06:20 PM   #5
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it some ok shit
work on your open mic more
4/10
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