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Old 08-04-04, 06:12 PM   #1
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ya int fuckig with me...... *seriously* this go's out to....

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this is for sonic and that other bitch who fronted on me sleeping thinking my raps aint serious.....

all i got is one thing to say......

FUCK YA......

cuz,
its like king kong aint got shit on me
climing to the top with fire-arm, ......... like i had burning sleevs
aint no emcee out there really concering me
cuz my flow lava N only reason u hot, ...... is if u got skin burned to the 3ed dagree
and i like to give shots,
so if u recieve one then, ...... its likely u'r in serguery
dont follow me,
cuz bullets i'll have u take that step back as if i reverse u'r knees
so dogs believe,
i sell more bodys then a stripper ouction
and know so many ballers,...... u could fill the court's-in
cuz i got more niggas ryde'in out in my circle,....... then them race-hores
YEA,
the blue-gray beam known for floss'in,
so if u see the "RED-fall'en-out" ...... they aint dieing from natrual causes
so plez dont forget who u face'in like u had "old-timers"
cuz the cops gonna have to dig deep,..... as if they was "gold-miners"
YEA,
im take'in all platnum and bright shyners
only to pon-it N keep doing it,..... till i see more bricks then them rock-climers
now look at this basterd,
mad, ......... cuz shot played the roll in hes "POP'" finder (paps)
keep looking at my bitch when she got the glock be-hinder
cuz grill'in only gonna have face pushed up and down on grinder
YEA
so quite playing with me and my free's
cuz i handle my-self with glocks and these,
which got ya profit time-stop'in, like i wear-it under my sleevs (get it )
so ya best to believe,
my key's gonna blow like alisha on knees (ha)
then toss ya body in the ocean, ..... with peranahs feist'ing on what u use to breath
YEAH,
so imma tell u like this playboy u need to leave
cuz my bullets brolic, they will levft u with ease
and have u boop'in for help like i knock'ed ova christer-reevs BITCH....

BANG BANG EARLY..................



I TOLD U IM GOING HARD FROM HERE ON OUT,
FUCK THAT THIS SWEET-SHIT FUCKING SAD SONG MAKING FUCKING WHAT IF SONGS AINT GOT SHIT ON ME......

IM THE REAL, U JUST THE FAKE
SO US TOGETHER IS LIKE WHAT BUSH AND BEN-LADDEN WOULD MAKE!!!!
BITCH.....


P.S ANY COLLABOS OUT THERE THAT WANNA HOLLA,

JUST HOLLA

AND COME RAW,

HOLLA...
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Old 08-06-04, 06:41 PM   #2
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upp'in this shit.....
some feed back would be nice.........
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Old 08-06-04, 06:58 PM   #3
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this nice man...was feelin it most definitly.......defeinite potential and definite talent...metaphores were nice word play was dope...was really feelin the first few lines.........check out my open mic and give some critic..........2
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Old 08-06-04, 07:37 PM   #4
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yo u wanna callabo holla at me sumtime i liked ur dropp shit was nice 8/10
fuck da hataz.....questions u in da crips?pm bout a callabo peep my new callabo's wit emerginmc07
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Old 08-08-04, 12:47 PM   #5
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upp'in....

thanks for the feed back-everyone...
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Old 08-08-04, 01:06 PM   #6
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yo do me a favor n peep my callabo's wit emerginmc07 n tell us wut u thought n yea im down 4 a callabo peace again good drop
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Old 08-08-04, 02:51 PM   #7
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aight cool..................................
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Old 08-08-04, 04:59 PM   #8
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anyone else?............................................. ...
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Old 08-08-04, 06:33 PM   #9
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Now that you've made this great text piece, I take you very serious.
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Old 08-08-04, 06:48 PM   #10
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nice shyt yungin.....................
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Old 08-08-04, 07:05 PM   #11
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yeah definitely feelin this... some good wordplay and imagery, structure was mostly good. nice drop!
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Old 08-08-04, 08:55 PM   #12
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thanks for the feed back fellas im feeling the love.....

holla back any-more feed back i know there is more people out there then this....
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