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Old 07-30-04, 12:45 AM   #1
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It took patience, learning from my mistakes that ive made
Patiently waitin for my greatness 2 get air play

Wit out the influence of these foolz in the streets 2 influence me
I take time in it Put pride in it~Pocketz is a product that must b

Look at my position~girly gotta job but not me i feel like quittin
Ive been in the trenches My name gets respect when mentioned

My dreams and Ambitions keep gettin twisted from these bitches
that want me 2 go from rags 2 riches in one day i kno im gifted

Neva will i in danger my health for this wealth no more hell tells
My temper is gettin tested im tellin u im reckless will u post bail?

for the Truest mc low and behold the d which took pride in me
Secretly im possessed wit Hypnotizm like jesus when he speaks

Understand true Lyricism comes outta Mr Henderson u hearin em
Steadily on the grind me against the world kinda like u versus Them

Fists in Scuffels believe it doesnt take much 2 put ya voice on Muffle
My heart bleeds one of a Felon that demands immediate Respect

my name gets Props respect it~Yours subdues in Neglect
My characteristics Reflect Views from one of the Fuckin Best

Jimmy got now dont care who got next the opposite of Mesh
Come and Behold the Best
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Old 07-30-04, 03:23 AM   #2
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dat nigga knockin da shit out da white boy funny as fuck n e ways i felt it nice real drop dont see those a lot now days keep ya head up n keep postin stay up peace out
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Old 07-30-04, 03:43 PM   #3
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pretty good drop it starts off confusing but i cought on pretty good any body wanna do a colab
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Old 07-30-04, 04:02 PM   #4
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You started off ill... I don't know what happened at the end. This had potential to be an excellent drop, but near the fifth bar, you started losing the feeing that was there before. You need to elvate on your vocab, though. Still a good drop, though. Keep it up.
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Old 07-31-04, 02:01 AM   #5
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Started Out Good, I Liked The " My Girl Gotta Job But I Dont" Line, Or However You Worded It... Was Feelin It, But Like Gfx Said, It Started To Fall Off Towards The End... Flow Was On Point Tho.. Overall Decent Drop...
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Old 07-31-04, 02:48 AM   #6
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i thought it was good dawg,kept it real...but i could do betta....j/p..peace dawg
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Old 07-31-04, 03:11 AM   #7
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yea dat was nice i feel ya, keep postin peace
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Old 07-31-04, 01:23 PM   #8
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uppin 4 feedback
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Old 08-05-04, 12:17 AM   #9
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Old 08-06-04, 04:07 PM   #10
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Old 08-06-04, 04:16 PM   #11
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yo i jus found out xxxtayve in yo crew b kool wit her.....
n e ways yo return da favor of leavin feedback n peep my new drop ft. emerginmc07
peace n holla back
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Old 08-06-04, 04:23 PM   #12
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Bro, that was some real shit, I felt it. Matter fact gimme some feedback on my shit:
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Thanks bro, 'preciate it.

Drop an honest vote. Gimme a link and I'll return the favor.
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Old 08-06-04, 04:32 PM   #13
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that waz sick ma nig no wonder u 15-1 but have u ever abttled sonic?
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