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my badd yo i aint see ya verse till i declined da battle...so i aint know u spit but just re post ya verse here

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 11:39 AM

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XxXtayve has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 10:41 AM.

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ima paste my verse of b4

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This cake is marvolous,matter of fact the way im eating u is gon be hilarious
You got 17 losses by the end of this joke u gon know im fucking serious
You battleing me is like trynna move a mountain,u never gonna make it,thumbsdown is what u handling
Why aint u got a pic?…scared to be told the thruth u look like a pig?..son take a fucking grip im Xtayve but still X-x-Xtasy
too many chumps wanna fucking lick my cunt,bitch i aint ur mutherfucking mom, i aint giving u my cum
when i step on the stage everybody drop their mic,today is ur last day,u gon know this aint a dyke
i rep this nerd like the statue of liberty to new york,ur lyrics slip down my for cos u just a weak dork
Dis ciggarette tips his anal shaped sombero,smoke dis fag and destory like the cape passero
theere aint no way u winning me,cos u got ur lines robbed with oil..so they slide of cos they greasy

done now waiting for you

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MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 10:52 AM.

now u a vet? 1st u was beggin sayin pleez put me in a team...
should be lucky i still got dez shells they could be in ya spline..
"6-5" ya record "short" giv it up it u just a rookie w/ a dream..
i saw "xxx" in ya s/n & knew u was just a"pussy on da screen"

i dont need lead n a rifle,u suck "marv albert" neva a bite u..
& ya "lines be stretched" more than tryouts at "american idol"

i display's it well,im " hott" dont "pick up a pen" dat a be like "raisin hell"...
u say u blazin dells??..nah all ya lines "look da same" like "asian males"..

im so sick u might wanna kiss my moms,& da kid drop bombs..
after dis lose u probly wont eva "rap" a "verse" on dis ".com"

ok uppin

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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

damn baby girl u my woman n all but dis nigga definetly has
dis 1 betta punches,multis everything both did good but he came stronger still love ya though xxx peace good battle......

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okay goodlookin can we get some more votes ppl......................

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

Xx- Punches Didnt Connect Very Hard, Flow Was Ok, Wasnt Feelin The Strecthed Bars...

Marv- Some Ok Wordplay, Punches Were Decent, Structure Was Better, And Flow Was Good.

Punches- Marv
Personals- Marv
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Marv
Metaphors- Niether
Originality- Tie
Structure- Marv

Final Vote--- Marv

Return Favor With Honest Vote-
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140771

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iight uppin

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uppin 4more votes!!!!!.................

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

marv got this hands down,no competition at all...x..you dint rhyme in your verse or have any punches...your verse was full of fillers go elevate b4 you battle anymore gurl..this verse was not good at all....marv..3rd bar..prolly meant ta be a punch but lookin at her verse it became a personal...
nice closer...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054

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left...2 many herbs