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Old 08-14-04, 04:08 AM   #1
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Gunz Go

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"Lettin my gunz go"


If yall aint all ready know-Im bout to let my gunz go
you dont think like me- Then I think you should know/
This is a lyrical tyrade- enough of that kind aid
if you come by my way- I will spray like roach Raid/
I got of enough to take down niggas whole empires
Necks leakin - The D.A. lookin for some Vampires/
You aint gotta be Kanye but you know where that go
You dont wanna be the one lookin when I let that Mack blow/
If you gotta know nigga Ill PM my Address
Ill show you where its gonna say Thats Ya Last Rest
Dont think to wear the vest I got a lot of Variety
You would think i was on Menace to Society

Thats just me lettin my pistol go
If you want I got some mo'
But you im out so there you go
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Old 08-14-04, 04:10 AM   #2
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And yo this aint no written shit either. So to tha nigga i tried to do a Topical about gunz this aint got nothing to do with that. This is just incase you happen to peep this shit.
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Old 08-14-04, 04:12 AM   #3
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yo i liked it but needs elevating
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Old 08-14-04, 06:54 AM   #4
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not bad 5/10 or 6/10 good vocab was what hit me keep using that vocab and add some stronger punches k yer flow was ight
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Old 08-14-04, 05:52 PM   #5
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Word word. I see some things i could change a lil bit but thats whats really good.
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