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08-17-04, 12:59 AM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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post feed back no name yet for the song
IP: 5043 32F4
My rhymes are customized to take you any day I aint afraid/
So Stop I out raped you man everyones sayin you got out played/. My rap is like me burnin you down with hot flames/ My punchlines hit you with lots of power just like I was lebron james/. I hate how when I battle people they like to play games/ When they cant even produce there own fuckin names/. Most of the time people say there gonna pull out there nine/ Now that’s a wannabe that will never grow up to shine/. some one is featuring in this song thats why its not long |
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08-17-04, 02:05 AM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
U P P I N
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08-17-04, 02:36 AM
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Banned!
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IP: C1DA C961
yo, wanna do a cloab, not the mixtext shit but a colab called "Guns Blazin" Part 1
nice little freestyle had some good lines |
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08-17-04, 03:47 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: CCAE A7E8
It's a bit too short for me in my opinion to be a eyecatching open mic...never the less i feel ya came aight in this the structure werent fucked and flowed well...jus try and increase ya wordplay dawg...keep it goin
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08-17-04, 09:58 AM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks but guranteed i cant do battles
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08-17-04, 10:00 AM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
no man im not a wannabe i can rap about guns lol im not a gangsta im a big 14 year old that dont put up with bitch natives
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08-17-04, 10:50 AM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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tight
IP: 7A16 BCAC
yo if dis went on it wud've been ill, in terms lyrics it was tight, it wud b gud to hear how u spit cos dis rhyme sound sick spitten slow or fast. i wanna c unuva post form u dog. Peace
Elusiv G ( lyrical masterminz n real skillz)
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08-17-04, 02:27 PM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
lol what^^ i didnt understand you and i made that song to bad boy this bad boy that and thats not even a goos ogn guy that was shit i made lol but ya chekc out my work is good
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08-17-04, 02:30 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: AD41 912D
dawg you needa keep your shit going on and spit longer
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hey yo im known to play it low// dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio// ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes// my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised// faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1 |
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08-17-04, 02:51 PM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
i told you that someone is in the song alright and there piece also 10 lines ok thats why it aint long plus the only part i like is this part>
My rap is like me burnin you down with hot flames/ My punchlines hit you with lots of power just like I was lebron james/. sense peopel liked it ill make it longer prob and my other song to and make the song mine ya ill make it longer but ya its ok i geuss not my best lol mad dog thanks man |
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