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Old 07-02-04, 03:11 AM   #1
Willa
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sex collab

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me n triple_n did this in less than 5 mins



i want a thug some1 2 give it 2 me rough
wen its time 2 fuck could beat the pussy ^
put me in cuffs spank me n pull my hair
ill proudly let these screams fill the air
this loves a flair its hours till we give it ^
i just want the sex i dont need the love


ma im the thug u need i could tell at 1st glance
i knew u were the 1 by the tingle in my pants
i wont b the man 2 show u the wedding rings
but i damn well sure can show u big things
ima bang that ass out all muthafuckin night
im known 4 lossenin ^ pussies that r tight
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Old 07-02-04, 04:47 PM   #2
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no offence will...but parts of ur verse.....didnt rhyme well at all.

i want a thug some1 2 give it 2 me rough
wen its time 2 fuck could beat the pussy ^

this loves a flair its hours till we give it ^
i just want the sex i dont need the love

vocab from both was simplistic, very short. Erm I werent feeling this at all.
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Old 07-02-04, 04:52 PM   #3
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^ ^^^<< That means Up ahah Nice Drop Will A peer hit Me Up 4 Tha Remix...Ill Show U wass Upp..
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Old 07-02-04, 04:59 PM   #4
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ok drop
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Old 07-02-04, 07:24 PM   #5
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it was not dat good but if u keep workin hard at it may b take sum time off diz site & practice in a few years u should b ready 2 cum bacc hard u know
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Old 07-02-04, 08:59 PM   #6
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fuck u new b u leave the site it was a freestyle and it does flow dumbass
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Old 07-02-04, 09:24 PM   #7
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nice shit will a peer. it flowed nicely. stay up. pc
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Old 07-03-04, 12:43 AM   #8
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yo uppin this leave a link and ill leave some feedback
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Old 07-03-04, 12:50 AM   #9
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iight that was somepretty tight shyt will a peer ...it had some nice flow...the vocab was alittle simple...good imagery..and nice Rhythem ..except for parts of your verse the didnt rhyme very well ..overal nice drop

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Old 07-03-04, 01:54 AM   #10
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damnit everything flowed lol aiight il peep ur om
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Old 07-04-04, 12:18 AM   #11
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uppin this hoe b4 i leave
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Old 07-04-04, 05:25 AM   #12
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yea this shit was pretty tight ma pc
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Old 07-04-04, 03:13 PM   #13
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freaky deaky but yall could of came up wit better vocabs.
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Old 07-05-04, 01:39 AM   #14
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will a peer i kno u got skills and all but i think this needed a little work nice drop though..................
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Old 08-24-04, 05:48 PM   #15
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Originally Posted by will a peer
me n triple_n did this in less than 5 mins



i want a thug some1 2 give it 2 me rough
wen its time 2 fuck could beat the pussy ^
put me in cuffs spank me n pull my hair
ill proudly let these screams fill the air
this loves a flair its hours till we give it ^
i just want the sex i dont need the love


ma im the thug u need i could tell at 1st glance
i knew u were the 1 by the tingle in my pants
i wont b the man 2 show u the wedding rings
but i damn well sure can show u big things
ima bang that ass out all muthafuckin night
im known 4 lossenin ^ pussies that r tight



You all REALLY took 5 minutes to write this? And you are proud of taking five minutes to write this? In 5 minutes, you should have something atleast twice this length and 10 times its quality. (Just my opinon, but maybe is has something to do with all the curse words/porn talk.)
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