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~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ 5 100.00%
shake-spear 0 0%
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Old 08-24-04, 03:54 PM   #1
shake-spear
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From: B-More
~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ vs shake-spear

IP: 3240 794D

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Old 08-24-04, 03:59 PM   #2
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shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 03:59 PM.
 
Old 08-24-04, 04:09 PM   #3
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~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 04:09 PM.
 
Old 08-24-04, 04:29 PM   #4
~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
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From: OrlAndO
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yo dawg just dont bite or no show that shit pisses me off ill be ready in 15........
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Old 08-24-04, 04:36 PM   #5
shake-spear
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From: B-More
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i shake peers wit my shakespear so stay clear/
and spit bars that takes queers bout eight years/
jus to understand have ku$tum stretched out like a rubberband/
brothaman u wouldnt be sick if u was the son of sam/(he was sick in the head)
and u aint da fuckin man u fuckin men stay stuck in dem/
ussually stay wit 4-9s like san fran but now im tuckin ten/
u tuck ya nuts and cluck u lil butt-fuck/
u lack word ill smack u backwords now ku$tum, mut$uk/(must suck)
and u know im betta then u so u have-to-hate/
cause da only time u get pussy is when u masterbate/ pussy

one
 
Old 08-24-04, 04:42 PM   #6
shake-spear
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From: B-More
IP: 3240 794D

yo i think i have ten bars but im new and dont know how yall count bars so im not sure i counted that as five but my fault if its too much.
 
Old 08-24-04, 04:58 PM   #7
~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
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From: OrlAndO
IP: 079B 578D

yo check it this rookie is finished lets go.......

i ''terrorize'' watch as the ''barrel-rise''...| keep playin *superman* watch as ya ass get ''paralized''...| and yes ur still gay even though u only *fuck* ''steril-guys''...| 1

shake-spear is running outta of *gas* like after a hurricane at ''texaco''/ so in sig this kid is the ''next-ta-go''/ becuase u not passing *kustums* like we're in ''mexico''...| 2
[i put people i beat in my sig* [signature]]

i ''shake-spear''/ and leave no-one enjoying him like ''fake-beer''/ b/c ur not beatting me just to ''make-it-clear''/ b/c ya lines are longer and more *played* than ''shakespear''...|3

shake-spear's a herb and his verse is ''poor-an-so-whack''....| mah punches will leave ya ''sore-an-so-black''...|and ill put a *bullet* on ya jersey like a ''jordan-throwback''...| 4

to beat me u will need ''all-ya-game''/ but ya verse belongs on the ''wall-of-shame''/ so after i murk u *retire* and dont comeback like the ''hall-of-fame''...| 5
 
Old 08-24-04, 05:01 PM   #8
~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
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From: OrlAndO
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good battle shake-spear uppin for votes................
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Old 08-24-04, 05:06 PM   #9
shake-spear
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From: B-More
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u nice son nice battle i like ya style uppin for votes
 
Old 08-24-04, 05:16 PM   #10
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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

u got this 1 for the simple fact that u hard punches that were actually hittin, goor metaphors, wordplay, multis, AND ur opener & closer were hot too, so u got the v/ from me aight -1-
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Old 08-24-04, 05:22 PM   #11
~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
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From: OrlAndO
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thanx for vote........1-0 still uppin................
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Old 08-24-04, 05:37 PM   #12
~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
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From: OrlAndO
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1-0 keep em kummin .......... i will return favors
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Old 08-24-04, 06:34 PM   #13
~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
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From: OrlAndO
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stop sleeping drop votes and i will hit up yalls battles [honestlly] 1-0 still uppin
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Old 08-24-04, 06:38 PM   #14
KISI
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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

good battle props to both. but here's the verdict.

shakes-you have flow and multi's down, but the problem is your content and phrases. They sound elementary.
"u tuck ya nuts and cluck, you lil buttfuck."
that sounds unbeleivably 5th grade, and this really takes away the intensity of your verse. You can't be on some childish shit when you battle son. You gotta put your game face on.

K.I.-good structure and presentation, and flow. but a true lack of hard punches on this one. but you come with an entertaining style though, which is key, and you came harder than your opponent did on this one so i'll give you the 'W'
 
Old 08-24-04, 06:41 PM   #15
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i shake peers wit my shakespear so stay clear/
and spit bars that takes queers bout eight years/
little multis 2ed line a filler....

jus to understand have ku$tum stretched out like a rubberband/
brothaman u wouldnt be sick if u was the son of sam/(he was sick in the head)
decent..

and u aint da fuckin man u fuckin men stay stuck in dem/
ussually stay wit 4-9s like san fran but now im tuckin ten/
decent

u tuck ya nuts and cluck u lil butt-fuck/
u lack word ill smack u backwords now ku$tum, mut$uk/(must suck)
ummm no i wasnt feeling this.....

and u know im betta then u so u have-to-hate/
cause da only time u get pussy is when u masterbate/ pussy
ending was preety weak....

u started decent but fell off.... 6.0

i ''terrorize'' watch as the ''barrel-rise''...| keep playin *superman* watch as ya ass get ''paralized''...| and yes ur still gay even though u only *fuck* ''steril-guys''...| 1
decent start...

shake-spear is running outta of *gas* like after a hurricane at ''texaco''/ so in sig this kid is the ''next-ta-go''/ becuase u not passing *kustums* like we're in ''mexico''...| 2
[i put people i beat in my sig* [signature]]
not bad preety good..

i ''shake-spear''/ and leave no-one enjoying him like ''fake-beer''/ b/c ur not beatting me just to ''make-it-clear''/ b/c ya lines are longer and more *played* than ''shakespear''...|3
preety good personal...

shake-spear's a herb and his verse is ''poor-an-so-whack''....| mah punches will leave ya ''sore-an-so-black''...|and ill put a *bullet* on ya jersey like a ''jordan-throwback''...| 4
haha nice feeling this.... *this alone won the battle*

to beat me u will need ''all-ya-game''/ but ya verse belongs on the ''wall-of-shame''/ so after i murk u *retire* and dont comeback like the ''hall-of-fame''...| 5
ha good ending....

nice verse good punches flow good creativeness was above average all around tight drop.... 8.0
 
 


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