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5 | 100.00% |
MjGrEeN |
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MjGrEeN vs shake-spear
IP: 0A85 F1D0
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines minimum. No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-29-04 at 04:26 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 04:27 PM.
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IP: C1DA C961
shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 04:29 PM.
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
Yo let me introduce you to me, fucking around with the best will end with murder, me being guil-ty,
I slew u 24 hours a day, the beef i bring also brings in pu-tay, i'll rock you as i sock you while i clock you then glock you, then your boyfriend will come along and cock you, i'm like a dragon, when i spit fire comes out, newbie ass bitch why dont you give me a shout? Your name is shake-spear and you think people will cheer, for me they'll cheer, i'll spit and drink beer, i'ma leer at you thinking your Richard Gere, it suits you to be paying for prostitutes like in pretty wo-man, the only difference is the ho's your mom, your fuck her as she remove the teeth up off her gum, screaming saying son your #1. As you can see i'm icing you in vexation, now i'ma rhyme and get into complication, the sensation of the nation as i layout my presentation as i see your rhymes getting old, shit your as old as a dinosaur eating vegetation. I beat your Dad up for acting mad, he said he wanted your ass so i bet your glad, i'm like a pro killer when i spit my verse, cause everyone i challange is a victim, must be a curse, never rehearse the shit i'm gonna say, i'm sorry bitch have i just ruined your day. I'm feeling like a G cuz i just got swifty, feeling nifty as i spend fifty on your mom to stop being shifty, I'ma have to call in a crane cause your moms driving me insane, shes in my house and she got stuck in the door, need something strong to remove her shes cracking up the floor, fat bitch comes to get her daily meat supply, i said nomore your weight seems to mulitiply, i'ma get high, fly through the sky as you try to diss on me, guy, after i'm done with you you'll wish you would die. Your like a lizard, you change colour when danger approaches, your black and blue after i'm done with you, your skills are worse than an infestation of roaches, coaches taking people to a freak show, everyones paying to see your moms Li-bi-do. Yoyo you must be feeling real dead now, your like a leach on bleach, i'll take you to the beach so you can tan, and so i can teach, you must be on the computer 24 hours a day, you think your good, but hey, its your mom that sat in the way of my truck, the bitch got fuck, with a sign on her back saying "I WILL SUCK", and on the front it said for food, i'm not being rude but your mom looks like a dude. I think i'ma slow down and lay down the final kill cause shit i've won nigga, you must be feeling ill, and by the end of the night you'll be sucking a pill, please chill, you know my shit is tight, i'ma go now retard, say good fucking night. |
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IP: C1DA C961
here i go
finnally an easy -victory/ my flows hot like lava he flow like an "Iceberg" which means-hes-"history"/ killin him softly like laurin hill ill leave the death of green-a-mystery/ be in ya mouth like listeren .......u are jus a bitch-to-me/ u cant see me in the rap game im suprized u even found-me/ but "greens" gettin ate up like i put him in a "brownie"/ clown-me? neva-dat like acrobats ull stay-gettin-tossed/ "MJ" u suck y dont u "moon walk" ya way-to-da -lose/ got "MJ" depressed but he need more-den-prozak/ put "23" shots in ya chest and rock ya vest as a "jordan throwback"/ so stop wit da nonsence go challenge somone dat sucks-like-u/ but i guess vacuums cant use a cpu so dat sucks-for-u/ iight dats my verse one |
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
uppin 4 votes............................................. ..
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DA FLAMETHROWER
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IP: CEF5 716F
Voted For: shake-spear
give it 2 Shake his verse was way better he had wordplay n sum metas his punches hit harder 2 Mj Green first u flowed 4 2 long den u said nuttin at dat u need 2 change ya structure 2 den u'll definately flow better v/Shake give an honest vote on da battles in my sig
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
whoa, if you stop to read i had a few metas, quite a few multis and such, if i am gonna get complaints cuz my stuff is too long then w/e man cuz if you stop to read the layour is good and i stopped and took time to write, sheesh.
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IP: C1DA C961
dont worry fam i thought ya shit was good... uppin for votes
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
i mean 'clown-me? neva-dat like acrobats ull stay-gettin-tossed/
"MJ" u suck y dont u "moon walk" ya way-to-da -lose/' wheres the rhyme in this i didn't do any screw ups, but hate all you want i'm sick of it.
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: shake-spear
ok ok 1st off wow green you wrote TOO many lines you shouldnt have wasted dat many lines dawg but that shows you enjoy rappin but sorry... shake takes it both strcuture was off but his flowed better and had punches and wordplay so he wins vote/shake-spear retun the favor pleeeeeeaaaaaaaaase dont ignore this like everybody else and you get money for votin so return it http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144615
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IP: C1DA C961
thx for da vote....................uppin for votes
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Turbulence Is Nice
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IP: 079B 578D
Voted For: shake-spear
even though u playin off mah throw back line its all good..... but mj u cant pm peeps sayin check out this battle and only vote if u think i won....how r u going to get better??? this isnt a hate or d/r vote punches: ss personals: none multis: ss metas: mj vote: ss he came harder and shake-spear u elevated a lot in one day did u do that website thing i mentioned?? hey go try out for violent type if u want in im impressed......
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Turbulence Is Nice
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IP: 079B 578D
just cause its unlimmited lines doesnt mean u have to write a bible dawg just next time put a limit u write way to much people r going to just skip ur verse if u write that much just for future knowledge
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GoD LiKe
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IP: 947A 2011
Voted For: shake-spear
WELL IM GONNA GO WITH SHAKE SPEAR he had a shorter verse that was more to the point MJGREEN Wack lyrics, no depth, bad flow, horrible structure, uneven bars left and right, Overall You got to be the worst battler i seen on this site Yo let me introduce you to me, fucking around with the best will end with murder, me being guil-ty, I slew u 24 hours a day, the beef i bring also brings in pu-tay, i'll rock you as i sock you while i clock you then glock you, then your boyfriend will come along and cock you, i'm like a dragon, when i spit fire comes out, newbie ass bitch why dont you give me a shout? totally fuckin wack
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