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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
sHoTTaBoY 1 16.67%
*LoYaLiTy™! 5 83.33%
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Old 09-02-04, 05:53 AM   #1
*LoYaLiTy™!
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*LoYaLiTy™! vs sHoTTaBoY

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6 - Lines
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Old 09-02-04, 05:54 AM   #2
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*LoYaLiTy™! has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 05:54 AM.
 
Old 09-02-04, 05:55 AM   #3
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Old 09-02-04, 06:05 AM   #4
Dirty Nigga
E-Style, Bitch.
 
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This Battle Gon' Be Over Before You Can Say 'ohwee'..
I'm Spittin 6 Hot Lines In 3 Minutes My Friend n Thats QUALITY..

I Can Merk You By Sayin One Lame Word Like DIRTBAG...
This Ol' Cross Dressin Ass Nigguh Got His Mommas Panties n HANDBAG...
At The Bar Actin Like A Chick Smokin Dicks Like The British Smoke FAGS..
This The Last Line n I'ma Bet This DumbFuck Already Raizin The White FLAG..!!

(British Call Cancer Sticks ...Fags)
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Old 09-02-04, 06:37 AM   #5
*LoYaLiTy™!
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never shot shit ya names wack, its obvious shottaboy takes it from the back,
a pussy nutsack,from the looks of your verse i can truthfully say its skill you lack,

your rec is sad, admit it kid pissin is the only time you got a consistent flow,
goin toe 2 toe with me hoe, honestly kid you'd be better off claimin a no-show,

Your lines are fucked for shore, like a beachhouse in the center of the earths core,
dumb whore,ya rhymes wouldnt be elevated if you wrote them on da tenth floor,
 
Old 09-02-04, 11:28 AM   #6
LIL'DREW
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From: St. Louis MO
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Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!

loyalty took this one...hands down...he made more sense in his rhymes...had more clever punches...betta structure...betta flow...

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Old 09-02-04, 04:57 PM   #7
Dirty Nigga
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When People Say ''That Made More Sense'' ....Like My Shit Didnt Make Sense...

Ya Either Gotta Be Stupid Or Illiterate If It Didnt Make Sense...............

But Whatever......

Upppppin 4 Fuckin Votes
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Old 09-02-04, 11:05 PM   #8
DV8
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Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!

1st verse dint really have any punches that connected,some self glorification in your verse did'nt help...work on your structure,n elevate your punches...2nd verse i liked your closer but the rest was average but good structure n flow overall betta drop.......
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Old 09-03-04, 08:30 AM   #9
bLiNkZ
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

aiight man dis was a close battle but a good one....
opener - loyality
closer - shot
flow - shot
punchez - shot
v/ i just connected betta and thought he landed betta punchez than loyality.....badluck loyality
 
Old 09-03-04, 09:32 AM   #10
SoLe
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Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!

shotty....

damn dog....you came weak this time...you threw up four lame basic bars.....no punches or personals.....weak flow no effort....lack of vocab....overall i would have to say it give your verse about a
4/10

Loyality

you came with come good disses no hard hitting punches but some that made me laugh....u had some good metaphores....the constant flow was your best...your verse flowed well u had mediocre vocab....u structured your verse well....and in my opinion u cam harder then shotty so my vote goes to you......
overall:6/10
Vote:Loyalty
sole*
 
Old 09-03-04, 09:39 AM   #11
Dirty Nigga
E-Style, Bitch.
 
IP: 24A3 0EF0

Yea Yea, I Know.........

I Thought This Fool Would Be An Easy Win So I Came At Him Elementary.....

I Thought I'd Juss Type Some Shit n Have Merked This Fool..

I Shouldda Tried Now Cause I Look Stupid, But Whatever lol..

That Kat Is Garbage n I'd Happily Have A Battle Knowin I Gotta Put Effort InTo It...
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Old 09-04-04, 01:17 AM   #12
Barburyin
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Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!

loyality won dis by a chin hair he had jus a lil betta flow n tha rhymes was prtty tight. the punchlines n vocab could b betta but it was iight
vote=loyality
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Old 09-04-04, 05:17 AM   #13
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Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!

wack battle...nah,jus playin..it was aight..
shotta some ok punches but ya flow was off n your opener was self glorification,british line was ok....but i thought loyalty had betta punches n had more content...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 09-04-04, 11:10 PM   #14
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From: Florida
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Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!

Loyality took this one...cuz (his or hers) punches were harder den shottaboy's...tha flow was aight..and tha structure wasn't all stretched out..but tha real reason he took this one iz becuz (his or hers) punches were hard and they landed...
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