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INFALLIBLE 1 100.00%
It's Elementary 0 0%
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Old 08-23-04, 12:07 AM   #1
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INFALLIBLE vs It's Elementary

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Old 08-23-04, 12:23 AM   #2
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It's Elementary has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 12:23 AM.
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Old 08-23-04, 12:28 AM   #3
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INFALLIBLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 12:28 AM.
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Old 08-23-04, 12:50 AM   #4
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lil young ass nigga, think u can fuck around, catch hot ones
and I ain't gotta go hard cause u ain't grown enough 2 hold guns

young buck thinkin of come up in the game
b 4 u even get in I'll DBO u fo ya fame

thought u was hard, I pulled ur card, and so u fold
got u a car, got u some bars, u how old?

u right "It's Elementary" how I'll school ur young ass
bet u ain't never drank a Olde E or chiefed on no grass

I'm like the beltway sniper, I'm not tryin ta brag but here
u need this # to this place that b makin body bags
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Old 08-23-04, 01:06 AM   #5
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Here's 14 lines for ya......

yo.............check it..............

His “car-rear”(career)’s bumped; his whole life’s is “wheel”(real) tough//
So long story short, instead of being born again, why don't you just grow up?//
Your bars are spaced away from each other, like you’re just trying to stutter//
Since you cant really fall, why don’t you fly away, the further, the better//
I make deliveries faster than the fiber-optic cables on the Disney ride you rode//
Genius do what it must, talent do what it can, and you should do what you're told//
The only time this wack mortal would flow is if he had jerked off and spoof//
Cashier at KFC asks what size bucket you wanted, you’d say the one on the roof//
This cat pretending he has a sense of over-confidence, when I can see him twitch//
Claiming you’re “phat”, when actually you eat your cereal out of a satellite dish//
Kid embarrassed by the elementary student, now he’s as red as a sack of tomatoes//
He isn't too sharp, in fact he's as quick-witted as an overstuffed sack of potatoes//
He thinks he has one of those mighty minds – yeah right, more like mighty empty//
We kinda all know you pretty much lose, but destroying you completely is tempting//
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Old 08-23-04, 01:07 AM   #6
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uppin for some votes....................................
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Old 08-23-04, 01:15 AM   #7
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Voted For: INFALLIBLE

Flow-Infallible
Punchlines-Infallible
Personals-neither
this was a close one but on the real Infall had better punchlines and flow he just put it down better and it sounded better
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Old 08-23-04, 07:09 AM   #8
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This was feedback posted for It's Elementary

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Dont Worry Its Ova For U Infallible Dis Going To Be Yo Last Battle

Get Ready To Pack Yo Bagz Biter

~peace~
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Old 08-24-04, 05:19 PM   #9
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a yo I'm uppin 4 v's so I can close this battle out, honest 1's only aight -1-
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Old 08-26-04, 03:51 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for It's Elementary

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elem u won. u had more punches, weak punches, but more than infallible. infallible u had weak punches as well. structure goes to in, but flow goes to elem. also in u did the minimum, elem did almost the max. "The only time this wack mortal would flow is if he had jerked off and spoof//
Cashier at KFC asks what size bucket you wanted, you’d say the one on the roof//" haha not bad, not great but not bad. u seemed to say he wuz fat, and thats kinda weak but ya. peace
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Old 08-27-04, 12:26 AM   #11
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nigga I ain't hatin but shit the fuck up til u got enuff posts ta even vote, I went hella soft on this cat + I'ont even like battle rappin all u do is hate on the next nigga more than he does u and see who wins???? who gives a fuck. He just was talkin shit 2 another nigga I was IM'in talkin madd shit so I said I'd battle his young ass, n e how UPPIN 4 more v's!!!!!
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Old 09-03-04, 03:56 PM   #12
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Voted For: INFALLIBLE

betta flow...betta wordplay...betta structure...
infallible took it hands down...
vote...infallible.................

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