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09-06-04, 06:36 PM
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New to RB
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First Spit Ever
IP: 6804 D41F
Quik-Spit
Livin on My own/ The projects my home/ Running the streets/ Bitches starten up beef/ Come after me? Ha/ You don't know where I be/ You can't find me - I find you/ Banging a Gang - Backed by my Crew/ Get the G's - up and the Ganstas togetha/ When we come 4 u its like stormy weatha/ On the 1s and 2s you think Im jus playen/ Listen Bitch - To What I'm sayen/ You aint no hard thug/ Fo sho aint no blood/ Last thang yo hear bang/ Last thing you see a tag - Reppen my gang/ I know I know, It nees same lengthish lines and flow. What can I say, This was my first freestyle. Just thought I'd post it.
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09-06-04, 06:36 PM
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IP: 6804 D41F
The link I replied too:
How will it Change By: Realistik http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=145332
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09-06-04, 08:11 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 896E D654
ummmm........
positive: you had aight flow that was steady and not all choppy............. it was straight but it needs work in some categories................. negative: as you said lengthen up your lines that is needed but not much.. punches and vocabulary should be expanded quite a bit............ after that its pretty good 
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