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09-23-04, 04:55 PM
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Hot Ill Shit *Post Feedback*
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Motherfukers, I massacre and teach
Like religious extremist, breach This code of peace, bring my piece Hearin more confessions than a priest Erotic violence, blood cumin on my clothes Finger fukin this gun, sexual violence carefully composed Giving a blowjob to the heats barrel, you been disposed Impregnate my gun gives birth to another bullet cumin your way Bust you in the leg n arms make you suffer, this our foreplay Psychological slaughter you like I butchered your brain cells Fuck competition my metaphors act like cartels Created this sick satanistic sensational scheme to do well In hip-hop, intellectual insane insight inside my mind Amazing accurate addictive advanced flow I designed Ahead of you at all times, moving forward even wen I rewind My presence deeply felt when I die I’ll still be a threat to mankind
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09-23-04, 04:58 PM
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#2
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E-Style, Bitch.
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its aight...
decent wordplay n vocab maybe couldda done with a chrus n another verse, but not bad for a freestyle 6/10 return the feedback on one of my open mics p e a c e
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09-23-04, 05:04 PM
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#3
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Banned: Biting
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O Aight Dats Nice Right Der Mayne Wordplays And Flow'z Put An Chorus Next Time It'll Betta Be Like Dat Mayne So Nice Mayne
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09-23-04, 05:08 PM
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#4
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New to RV
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IP:
aite safe, uppin for more feedback!
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09-23-04, 06:08 PM
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Flyweight
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Str8 Trash
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09-24-04, 03:16 PM
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#6
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New to RV
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IP:
fuck u homie like 2 c u do betta!!!
uppin for more feedback!!
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09-26-04, 10:42 AM
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#7
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New to RV
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IP:
uppin for mre feedback!!!
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09-27-04, 05:48 PM
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#8
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New to RV
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IP:
More Feedback!!!
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09-27-04, 05:51 PM
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#9
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New to RB
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yo it was prety decent good i felt u dawg i read evry line carfully n got it, hit my open mic up
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09-28-04, 04:56 PM
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#10
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New to RV
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IP:
thanxs man
uppin for more feedback!
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09-29-04, 03:54 AM
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Light Weight
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Erotic violence, blood cumin on my clothes
Finger fukin this gun, sexual violence carefully composed Giving a blowjob to the heats barrel, you been disposed Impregnate my gun gives birth to another bullet cumin your way Bust you in the leg n arms make you suffer, this our foreplay hellllll yea dog thas the pimp shit dont listian to these doods, this shit is phat as fuck
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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB -crunchy blac(three 6 mafia) i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged -styles p(the lox) u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice -I 20 Quote:
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09-29-04, 02:59 PM
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ayo, thanxs dawg uppin for more feedback!
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