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09-08-04, 04:09 AM | #1 | ||||||
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::Straight Sickness::
IP: 3FCF 03A9
::::::::::::::Ya'll Made Me This WaY!!:::::::::::::
::i spit sadistic-lyrics that'll blow-up-a-mic:: ::to all tha mystic-spirits when they show-up-at-night:: ::i'll grab-you-with-a-quote that'll slow-up-ya-fight:: ::then i'll stab-you-in-the-throat, make you throw-up-a-knife:: ::i'm makin money-on-the-side cuz i hoe-up-ya-wife:: ::i fucked ya honey-in-my-ride man she know-what-i-like:: ::Shit i've popped-so-many-pills that i glow-up-at-nite:: ::and i got-so-many-skills man my flow-is-so-tight:: ::i'll Fuckin murda-tha-vets just watch me shred-up-tha-mic:: ::man i'll serve-em-with-threats and fill they head-up-with-fright:: ::i hit-so-many-drugs man i'm-as-high-as-a-kite:: ::i'll strip-those-silly-thugs of their diamonds-and-ice:: ::i'll send a clip-of-cold-slugs from my tech-to-a-dyke:: ::kill a bitch-in-cold-blood man, i'll get-you-tonite:: ::i'mma set-you-a-lite, man my scripts-Fuckin-blaze:: ::i'm that best-on-this-site compared to you Penis-suckin-gays:: No BEEF!!!!!! just what was on my head................ |
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09-08-04, 05:40 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 3FCF 03A9
feedback would be much appreciated thanx
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09-08-04, 06:52 AM | #3 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4406 6658
COLOR=Sienna]nice rymhe stucture right through
pop some bigger vocab in there next time to elevate a level good solid rap. |
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09-08-04, 11:49 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 3FCF 03A9
maybe we can battle so u can help me elevate.....this is gonna be an audio.....and we should battle hit me up
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09-10-04, 05:24 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 3FCF 03A9
uupin this for some feed....ill return tha favor.....
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09-12-04, 07:08 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 0F7A 2931
thanx......uppin this for some more feed yall...p.m me battle links
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09-12-04, 09:35 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo that shit was hot fam.. you got made skill's......
hit up my open mic......been gone for awhile
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09-12-04, 10:00 PM | #8 | ||||
Jumpin' Along
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IP: C56C 93CC
this was an okay drop..all around it was pretty short but it had some nice -punchlines..decnet multies..the structure was pretty good... overall nothing more i can say it was pretty good drop..overall keep it up and next time just try to add some imagery ..and elevate..and you'll be good
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09-12-04, 10:05 PM | #9 | |||
Home Of Philly
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IP: 7DC8 13A6
Hot Shit Mayn
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