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09-12-04, 08:05 PM | #1 | ||||
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Random Assasination
IP: 3240 794D
theres a point in time where mine and ur path's crossed/
When I thought about layin you out with my bare paw/ I dont need no weapons I jus need these brickz/ Wanna role on my crew dawg you gotta go through Fickz/ We get in the ring, I drop you like Ali did Forman/ So you reduce to makin grills and doin car commercial supportin-/ Ya old reputation as a number one nigga to get the job done/(duuunn) You kiddin'? I been hittin the thin line of livin for an adrenaline rush/(ruuush) Now I am the assasin and your the prey/ Been pickin through your body with axes and clay/ Stick a genade in your oven so when you awake--/ theres 3-dozen body parts floatin in a bloody lake/ Been doin it clean but there's at time to get ill/ Run up in a niggaz house kill him and bury him in a feild/ Theres a time and a place for verbal vaccination/ Until I see you watch for your random assasination/ : not my best but I am jus tryin to get posts and feedback, I will hit ya'll a little harder next time.
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09-12-04, 08:59 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: C56C 93CC
pretty decent read... you had okay structure but for open mics it would be best not to // put those lines to end your lines..anyways you had some okay wordplay..decent mutlies...overall keep it up and elevate
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