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Old 09-11-04, 02:00 PM   #1
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niggaz keep talkin

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niggaz keep talkin bout im frsh on the block well you right/...
but dont get ya fukin balls in a not cuz im tight/...
keep thinkin i suck and i wont deal ya/...
wont be talkin with a fat ass lip now will ya/...


see niggaz call ciara myst but im a fukin villain/...
ill kick ya bitch ass whether fakin or on the reallin/...
i shoot perfect strikes wheteher aimin for you or them/...
ill stomp ya bitch ass worse then eminem did kim/...
when i say ill kick ya ass i mean wit no hesitation/...
bust a nut in yo girls face and call it a sticky situation/...
i rip the mic at times and make bitches look foolish/...
niggaz like to battle?theres no time like the present lets do this/...
niggaz dont fuk around cuz "niggaz dont want no drama"/...
whered i get my first ass from "i got it from her momma"/...

niggaz keep talkin bout im frsh on the block well you right/...
but dont get ya fukin balls in a not cuz im tight/...
keep thinkin i suck and i wont deal ya/...
wont be talkin with a fat ass lip now will ya/...
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Old 09-11-04, 02:19 PM   #2
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uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin upppin uppim uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppim
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Old 09-11-04, 02:19 PM   #3
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this was aight for an open mic, drop.. if this is your first open mic, then it's nice for a new-comer.. take critism contructively.. you need to elevate with word-play, etc... but like i said as a newbie i don't expect much, but nice startin' out, see ya around, aight..
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Old 09-11-04, 02:32 PM   #4
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aight thanx still uppn uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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Old 09-11-04, 04:59 PM   #5
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uppin uppin uppin
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Old 09-12-04, 01:37 AM   #6
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this wasnt to great man...get rid of the "im harder than you topic" ..it played out man...you got time to elevate man...and find some decent rhymes.....pz
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Old 09-12-04, 02:14 AM   #7
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this was pretty good for a newcomer... but you just need to lookingto what wordplay..and imagery is in an open mic ...naa'mean..just to elevate....welll this was pretty good keep elevated and you'll do good ... nice drop..
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Old 09-12-04, 09:30 PM   #8
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yeh it was tight chek out the remix tho niggaz
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