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09-11-04, 02:00 PM | #1 | ||||||
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niggaz keep talkin
IP: 0825 899A
niggaz keep talkin bout im frsh on the block well you right/...
but dont get ya fukin balls in a not cuz im tight/... keep thinkin i suck and i wont deal ya/... wont be talkin with a fat ass lip now will ya/... see niggaz call ciara myst but im a fukin villain/... ill kick ya bitch ass whether fakin or on the reallin/... i shoot perfect strikes wheteher aimin for you or them/... ill stomp ya bitch ass worse then eminem did kim/... when i say ill kick ya ass i mean wit no hesitation/... bust a nut in yo girls face and call it a sticky situation/... i rip the mic at times and make bitches look foolish/... niggaz like to battle?theres no time like the present lets do this/... niggaz dont fuk around cuz "niggaz dont want no drama"/... whered i get my first ass from "i got it from her momma"/... niggaz keep talkin bout im frsh on the block well you right/... but dont get ya fukin balls in a not cuz im tight/... keep thinkin i suck and i wont deal ya/... wont be talkin with a fat ass lip now will ya/... |
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09-11-04, 02:19 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin upppin uppim uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppim
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09-11-04, 02:19 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
this was aight for an open mic, drop.. if this is your first open mic, then it's nice for a new-comer.. take critism contructively.. you need to elevate with word-play, etc... but like i said as a newbie i don't expect much, but nice startin' out, see ya around, aight..
~wun~
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09-11-04, 02:32 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
aight thanx still uppn uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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09-11-04, 04:59 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin uppin uppin
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09-12-04, 01:37 AM | #6 | ||||||
Yes you.
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IP: 5285 DC82
this wasnt to great man...get rid of the "im harder than you topic" ..it played out man...you got time to elevate man...and find some decent rhymes.....pz
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09-12-04, 02:14 AM | #7 | ||||
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IP: C56C 93CC
this was pretty good for a newcomer... but you just need to lookingto what wordplay..and imagery is in an open mic ...naa'mean..just to elevate....welll this was pretty good keep elevated and you'll do good ... nice drop..
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09-12-04, 09:30 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
yeh it was tight chek out the remix tho niggaz
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