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09-11-04, 10:31 PM | #1 | |||||||
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SICK WORLD!!!--A MUST READ!!!!! Lyrical Artist
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Sick World!!!
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- IP: 18CC 30C4 THE WORLD IS SICK LIKE EBOLA AND AIDS WHEN THEY MIX!!!/ LIKE HUMANS HAVING SEX WIT ANIMALS, MAKE YA WANNA SPIT!!!/ KIDS GET GRIPPED AND WHIPPED OR SOMETIMES RAPE!!!/ EVEN SATANIST SKINNED KIDS TIL' THEY GOT NO FACE!!!/ BONES OUT OF PLACE, MURDER HAPPENS WITHOUT A SIGN OR A TRACE!!/ AND EVEN THE TERRORISTS TRYIN TO WIPE OUT HALF OF THE RACE!!/ WE NEED GOD'S GRACE IN THIS NATION CAUSE ABOMINATION IS WHAT WE FACIN/ PEOPLE PRAYING OUT OF DESPERATION BECAUSE DRUGS, SEX, AND MONEY IS THE WORLD'S EDUCATION!!!/ EVEN TEENS HAVE SEX IN CHURCHES WIT NO HESITATION!!/ (sexual) PERVERSIONS HITTIN THE EARTH WIT FULL PENETRATION!!/ HERE'S AN EXPLANATION!!/ LESBIANS AND GAYS INCREASES FROM GENERATIONS TO GENERATIONS!!/ THE WORLD'S FINAL DESTINATION IS IN REVELATION!!/ WHAT I'M SAYIN AIN'T NO PRESENTATION CAUSE SICKNESS STANDS/ I CAN'T UNDERSTAND WHY EVIL MOMS THROW BABIES IN TRASH CANS/ AND IT USE TO BE MAN MAKIN THE MONEY NOW THE MONEY MAKIN THE MAN, NOW DARKNESS EXPANDS!!!/ SO YOU START LIVIN THE SAME LIFE TIL YA OLD AND ASHY!!/ SO WHAT'S THE POINT OF MONEY IF YOU CAN'T EVEN BE HAPPY!!/ THE THINGS I'VE SEEN IS EVIL, IT'S LETHAL!!/ AND WHY DO SEXUAL IDOLATERS HAVE SEX WIT DEAD PEOPLE!!/ THIS WORLD IS CURSE AND IT'S ABOUT TO BE WORST!!!!!!/ IF GOD WASN'T LOVE, HE'LL EXPLODE US WIT NUCLEAR WEAPONS THAT'S BIGGER THAN THE EARTH!!!!!/ THIS SICKNESS MAKES ME HURL, MY MIND SWIRL TIL THE POINT MY EYES START TO TWIRL!!!/ I'M LIKE A SLAVE IN A CAGE, JUST STUCK IN THIS SICK WORLD!!! LYRICAL ARTIST MIC17PHILLY@YAHOO.COM COPYRIGHTED@2004 LIVING FAITH CHRISTIAN CENTER ALL WRITTEN BY LYRICAL ARTIST |
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09-12-04, 04:25 PM | #2 | |||||||
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Give me some feedback ya'll
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09-12-04, 04:48 PM | #3 | |||
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Sick World!!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- IP: 18CC 30C4 ^^^^^^^ mods check that it might be bitin........... |
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09-12-04, 07:52 PM | #4 | ||||
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nice flow, I think u started off the post real nice and u got to the punches........um, not much else to say, nice post. pz 1
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09-12-04, 09:06 PM | #5 | ||||
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this was a pretty hot read... your structure was pretty messed up
and for an open mic i would use // to end your sentences... your flow was okay....feelins and emotinos...pretty decent... wordplay..was good..overall nice drop..keep it up...
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09-14-04, 11:42 AM | #6 | |||||||
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Give me some feedback!!! PEace
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