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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-13-04 at 04:43 PM

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*+*ludacris*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 05:13 PM.

luda luda on da myk diss this battle down to da ground//
this bitch thinks his rich coz he found a penny in a mound//
hes calls himself j-z hes not even gonna get 1 word in lyk he wud//
ill slap da nigga to da ground get the basterd face andput it in da mud//
i dotn lyk gay thats y im taking them all out 1 by 1 i will shout i win//
this battle has only just opend but soon as we drop it will be closed in a min//
basterd basterd on da myk rapping his wack rhymes thinking his bad//
im winning this cunt 4-0 up he nos im gonna win so hes getting mad//
gay gay gay guy wus up u got beat its called gay got defeat//
theres a gay guy on da corner waiting 4 u 2 to meet//
my m8 said he seen u in da gay bar basterd bar n loads more hes seen u kissing the gay guys dick//
we not u want to have it off in da gay bar u no u want to steal micks dick n then lick//

Check>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>in>>>batty>man>>>>>

coem on heck in n drop yo verse mon

r 4 fuck sake check in n drop yo verse

Jay-Z has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 08:39 AM.

I;ll Kill-herbs .. With Illwords.. And My Lyrical Spits
Son, The Only Time U Beatin "whites".. Is Cumin With Ya Dick
& Shit.. Im Living My Life.. Ripping The Ice.. And Smoking Dro..
Ayo I Lost My Fone.. Wait It's In Ludacrisses Afro!
Ya Fucking Wid Jigga.. Da Nigga? Who's The Best Vet..
I Seen Better Drop's Than Yours In The Toilet....

hahaha Dat NIGGA HAD 0 PUNCHLINES.. LOOOOOOL

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Voted For: Jay-Z

hahaha, yours made me laugh.

I;ll Kill-herbs .. With Illwords.. And My Lyrical Spits
nice opener ^8/10
Son, The Only Time U Beatin "whites".. Is Cumin With Ya Dick
funny ass shit right there ^9/10
& Shit.. Im Living My Life.. Ripping The Ice.. And Smoking Dro..
eh a lil weak^5/10
Ayo I Lost My Fone.. Wait It's In Ludacrisses Afro!
^4/10
Ya Fucking Wid Jigga.. Da Nigga? Who's The Best Vet..
I Seen Better Drop's Than Yours In The Toilet....
^8/10

6.8/10

luda luda on da myk diss this battle down to da ground//
this bitch thinks his rich coz he found a penny in a mound//
hes calls himself j-z hes not even gonna get 1 word in lyk he wud//
ill slap da nigga to da ground get the basterd face andput it in da mud//
i dotn lyk gay thats y im taking them all out 1 by 1 i will shout i win//
this battle has only just opend but soon as we drop it will be closed in a min//
basterd basterd on da myk rapping his wack rhymes thinking his bad//
im winning this cunt 4-0 up he nos im gonna win so hes getting mad//
gay gay gay guy wus up u got beat its called gay got defeat//
theres a gay guy on da corner waiting 4 u 2 to meet//
my m8 said he seen u in da gay bar basterd bar n loads more hes seen u kissing the gay guys dick//
we not u want to have it off in da gay bar u no u want to steal micks dick n then lick//

you got a 4/10 jus cuz it wasnt as hard as jay's

metas// jay
punches/jay
flow//jay
structure/luda
personals/jay n luda
score/jay

opener closer/jay

winner/jay

drop an honest vote .. its in my sig

luda u can do alot better jus dont stretch ya rhymes out so much, and hit them harder

Voted For: Jay-Z

this was more of a non streched lines luda change yer name no hate but serious do that same with jay-z you guys should change yer name yer pretty good for newbs so i would do that but anyway:
punches:luda
metas:no one
multi's: jay-z
vocab: jay-z
flow:jay-z luda had streched lines
openers: jay-z
closener: jay-z once again streched lines luda
v/jay-z
return the favour in my battle verse shake-spear the link is in mys ig thanks and explain yer vote like i did for you

Voted For: Jay-Z

Ahh! Jay z, n ludacris in the house.. (kiddin)

Jay's verse
I;ll Kill-herbs .. With Illwords.. And My Lyrical Spits
Son, The Only Time U Beatin "whites".. Is Cumin With Ya Dick
7.3/10 put together well..
& Shit.. Im Living My Life.. Ripping The Ice.. And Smoking Dro..
Ayo I Lost My Fone.. Wait It's In Ludacrisses Afro!
4/10 this could of been worded diff, but its ok
Ya Fucking Wid Jigga.. Da Nigga? Who's The Best Vet..
I Seen Better Drop's Than Yours In The Toilet....
7/10 hah another funny one

7/10
Nice drop jay, personals, flow structure, and vocab fit real well
pretty nice.

Luda's verse
luda luda on da myk diss this battle down to da ground//
this bitch thinks his rich coz he found a penny in a mound//
6/10 pretty good.
hes calls himself j-z hes not even gonna get 1 word in lyk he wud//
ill slap da nigga to da ground get the basterd face andput it in da mud//
2/10 not really feelin this..
i dotn lyk gay thats y im taking them all out 1 by 1 i will shout i win//
this battle has only just opend but soon as we drop it will be closed in a min//
3/10 ...
basterd basterd on da myk rapping his wack rhymes thinking his bad//
im winning this cunt 4-0 up he nos im gonna win so hes getting mad//
4/10 ..
gay gay gay guy wus up u got beat its called gay got defeat//
theres a gay guy on da corner waiting 4 u 2 to meet//
0/10 LMAO! what was that.
my m8 said he seen u in da gay bar basterd bar n loads more hes seen u kissing the gay guys dick//
we not u want to have it off in da gay bar u no u want to steal micks dick n then lick//
3/10 hmm..

5/10


Luda ur intro was Good!,punches and flow.. but u exceeded the line limit and ur last few verses i wasn't really feelin u could get better.

that's why i voted for jay... return the fave in the sig..
later

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Voted For: *+*ludacris*+*

LUDA GOT DIS HANDS DOWN


YO JAY-Z NICE VERSE AND PUNCHES AND FLOWZ BUT YO PUNCHES DIDNT HIT HARDER DAN LUDA// NICE MAYNE

LUDA NICE MAYNE PUNCHES WAS HITTING IT AND DA FLOW WAS FLOWIN NICE

JAY WORK ON YO STRUTURE

~PEACE~

LUDA RETURN AN FAV

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Voted For: Jay-Z

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Jay-Z -
Yo punches were hard and they landed...
Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)...
Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once...
And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all...
5/10

*+*ludacris*+* -
Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also...
Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out...
Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall...
And your vocab was aight too...
4/10

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