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09-21-04, 05:47 PM
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Evil Uprise
IP: 5510 817C
...yea i had a dream about this last night i got up wrote some shit an recorded real quick.... |
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09-21-04, 06:37 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: DBCE DC18
yea yea dawg y getting better jus work on the things I told u too an you'll be fine.
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09-21-04, 06:38 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5510 817C
...yo thankz bugz apreciate you helpin me propz....
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09-21-04, 08:04 PM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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IP: 78D8 9CA9
whoa. Don't like the beat at all man. It's a mad hype sample (Jay used this) and the beat is slow - so it contradicts. Not really feeling the spoken word style either. Needs MAD more emotion. I see where you going with this track, and it's got potential, but not feeling much of anything off it right now. And turn ya vocals up a touch.
ps - reply to other threads - I got no problem closing threads - na'mean. be easy -Phenom
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09-21-04, 09:38 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5510 817C
word....thanks for tha feedback dawg tryin to get betta new at this uppin....
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09-22-04, 04:11 AM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
Spoken style is old...lol But u elevatin keep on droppin na'mean. Quality is blah!!...like mine..lol lyrics were good scream...feel the beat more connect wit it.....u kno emotions.
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09-22-04, 04:28 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
...word thankz dv alwayz open for advise...
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09-22-04, 06:52 AM
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illy fo' really
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IP: 9588 E886
... I think the beat didn't suit ya vocals at all, especially coz it was spoken, keep droppin though but wit more emotion. You definatly get better ...  ... |
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09-22-04, 07:44 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
word..thanks fa tha feed
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09-23-04, 09:57 AM
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New to RB
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IP: C1B6 770C
i agree w/ most...you rode the beat pretty decent especially in the beginning..turn it up a lil and add some emotion you'll be there
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09-23-04, 11:23 AM
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: E096 F2B7
I'll be the only honest an blunt one besides Phenom...
It was wack.... The beat...was annoyin as hell. And you have no emotion. Work on it. -1 |
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09-23-04, 03:25 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: DFFC 2783
Just add more feeling and emotion into your presence. Your topic and how you presented was coo, but you made it seem that you didn't want to do it in the tone of your voice. Just keep at man, you'll get it.
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09-23-04, 05:41 PM
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The Light
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IP: C5D3 9246
na i gotta diagree.. spoken word style is not old.. its just a aquired tatse.. actually, spoken word is way less common than the other styles so it would be less old than what everone else is tryna do or does... this track has potential.. keep doin it
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09-23-04, 06:03 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
word emotions and mic prescence... concentrate on gettin comfortable with some headphones on and a beat... record freestyles- record shit you wrote a month ago whatever, just get more comfortable on a mic.
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09-23-04, 09:32 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
word thanks everyone i'm gettin betta an carson it wasnt that bad lol....
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