[....Chorus....]
Jesus Listen Ta Me.....I'm Tired Of LIVIN THIS LIFE
I Juss Wanna Grow Wingz, Fly Away From Where I Can't Get HIT WIT THA PIPEZ
I Even Think About Bein Safe In My CRIB IN THE NIGHT
Why Must I Live Life Comin To Tha STRIP JUSS TO FIGHT
Shitz Crazy...I Could Get KILLED WIT THE GAT
So I Stay Wit A Vest...Cause I Aint Catchin STEEL TO MY BACK
But Why Must I PEEL WIT THE MACK?
Cause If I Get Killed...Tha Game Juss Lost Tha REALEST WIT RAP

[....Verse One....]
Listen Jesus, I'm Gettin Tired Of HUGGIN THE BLOCK
I Feel I'm Growin Out Tha Hustle Game,An THUGGIN WIT ROCKZ
I'm Tryna Get My Life Straight Wit Diamondz Dat BLUSH IN THE DROP
Get My Nukkaz Out The Hood So They Dont Get Sprayed When They BUSTIN THE GLOCKZ
But When Somethin Goes Wrong...Instigatorz Be Tha First Ta RUSH IN THE SPOT
But When They In Tha Same Predicament,They Try An Act Like Itz NOTHIN TA WATCH
When Ya Broke...Even Ya Own Nukkaz Behind Hopin You Stay STUCK IN THESE BLOCKZ
But When You Shine....Then They Wanna Come Back Cause You STUNNIN WIT DROPZ
Even When You Facin Tha Oddz...It Seemz Some Of Ya Catz Is RUNNIN WIT COPZ
They Dont Wanna See Ya Makin It Out Tha Slumz...They Wanna See Ya RUNNIN WIT SHOTZ
They Won't Even Care If They Theif Ya Chedda.....Cause They Tryna Cop SOMETHIN THAT POPZ
So Why Around My Real Nukkaz I Gotta Keep My Cash In SOMETHIN WIT LOCKZ
Jesus...Whys This Gotta Do Down???Was It In Ya Planz SOMETHIN THAT DROPZ???
I Don't Think So, So They More Determined To Make My Life SOMETHIN THAT STOPZ

[....Chorus....]
Jesus Listen Ta Me.....I'm Tired Of LIVIN THIS LIFE
I Juss Wanna Grow Wingz, Fly Away From Where I Can't Get HIT WIT THA PIPEZ
I Even Think About Bein Safe In My CRIB IN THE NIGHT
Why Must I Live Life Comin To Tha STRIP JUSS TO FIGHT
Shitz Crazy...I Could Get KILLED WIT THE GAT
So I Stay Wit A Vest...Cause I Aint Catchin STEEL TO MY BACK
But Why Must I PEEL WIT THE MACK?
Cause If I Get Killed...Tha Game Juss Lost Tha REALEST WIT RAP

[....Verse Two....]
As I Get Older I Get Wiser...As I Get WISE I GET SMARTER
But I'm Smart Enough Ta Realize They Want My LIFE TA GET SLAUGHTERED
My Best Bytch Right Now Is Tha 45...But I Ain't TRYIN TA SPARK HER
I Don't Even Wanna Nut In My Shorty Cause I Don't Even Wanna Think About DERIVIN A DAUGHTER
I Ain't Tha Type Ta Go Back To Her Ex, Brag About Some DIAMONDZ I BOUGHT HER
Dat'z Not Me, I Rather Get A Shot To Tha Chest...And Have My Body LIE IN THE WATER
I Rather Cop A Stable Job, Instead Of Investin' Coke...Gettin BREAD FOR MY DIMEZ
It's Not That It'll Please My Family...It'z That I Know It'z BEST FOR MY WIFE
Even Further Than That....So Now I Stick Wit INVESTIN MY RHYMEZ
Prayin' One Day My NECKLACES SHINE
But I Got These Desperate Prickz Plottin On Tha Boy Tryna Take Away Tha REP WIT THE NINEZ
This Is Why I Get FED UP WIT LIFE
I'm Tired Of These Nukkaz Tryna Get Me WET UP WIT PIPEZ
So Now I Juss Hold My Head, Till I Finally EXIT THIS LIFE....

[....Chorus....]
Jesus Listen Ta Me.....I'm Tired Of LIVIN THIS LIFE
I Juss Wanna Grow Wingz, Fly Away From Where I Can't Get HIT WIT THA PIPEZ
I Even Think About Bein Safe In My CRIB IN THE NIGHT
Why Must I Live Life Comin To Tha STRIP JUSS TO FIGHT
Shitz Crazy...I Could Get KILLED WIT THE GAT
So I Stay Wit A Vest...Cause I Aint Catchin STEEL TO MY BACK
But Why Must I PEEL WIT THE MACK?
Cause If I Get Killed...Tha Game Juss Lost Tha REALEST WIT RAP

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my links i replied to more but just left 2

uppin for soem fuckin feedback

Aight Ill be staright with you, It had a nice concept But 0 structure in my book, Very nice wordplay and all that but Man U need 2 elevate.... And whats with all the "caps locks"? Well Man Uppin this piece I give u a

6.7/10 Feed my piece if u can

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