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Old 09-27-04, 10:24 PM   #1
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School Lesson

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punch your library card and brush up on your vocab skills
i brings more death than coke-lab-kills
we both pack thrills - but dont lack skills
to get the zone all off the hinges
shoot up more rhymes than fiends use suringes
but your off by some inches
a mid emcee thats been-since
sometime before i met dude
but i knocked him off and had his whole set screwed
he lived on a farm
so i burned down the barns and raided through all hens
my slaughters last longer than a maybach benz
the cows are gone and the pigs are in the fryer
o.s.c.a.r. - i cooked em like mr. myer
and paraded the goats for higher
im THE greatest of all time
my lyrics on default rhyme
the sickest with 3 fault lines
dont cross em - you'll be far behind

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Old 09-27-04, 11:29 PM   #2
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aight yo nice drop over all 8/10 i was totally feling it but the on line where you rhymed inches with been-since i wasnt feeling it just kinda seemed like u reworded it just so it would rhyme i liked the oscar line tho..nice drop man elevate and work on some structure cuz you have lines drawn out and some short keep it all together and itll be hot
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Old 09-28-04, 01:55 AM   #3
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i liked ya verse mate pretty good shit. 6.9/10
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Old 09-28-04, 04:32 AM   #4
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This started off dope . You used some good multi's . But it kind of died off toward's the end. you started nice and complex then sort of mellowed it down. Everything before. ... Lived on a farm was dope. Everything afterward's sort of lost it's hype.....
overall 7/10 .. pz
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Old 09-28-04, 08:38 AM   #5
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thanks @....uppin for more feeds
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Old 09-28-04, 06:56 PM   #6
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uppin for feeds
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Old 09-29-04, 09:42 PM   #7
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dont sleep...uppin
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Old 10-06-04, 12:04 PM   #8
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feeds needed...uppin
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