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07-01-02, 01:27 AM
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Re: Crazy
IP: 46D5 C827
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These seem to be the lines that stuck out the most to me Maybe cause i know what your talking about, but the way you express yourself in these 1st few beginng lines leads you into a very powerful body and end...that's how most your relationship poems are, thats what makes them most unique from what i recall...This was another great piece...nice job. -Epik |
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07-01-02, 08:11 AM
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IP: 4DA8 A463
im feelin this 4 sho.felt da emotion put in
Why do I try to do anything to better myself when no one wants to notice?/ Sometimes I just pick up things, look at them and think "I should throw this"/ ^^ fav lines.nice drop.~1~ |
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07-05-02, 06:39 AM
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IP: C17A 74D0
I am sorry....and i love you.....thas all am going to say...
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07-05-02, 08:23 AM
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IP: 0922 4529
oh girl..once again you bloe my mind wit another one of ya drops...i felt that line bout be'n lower then soil deeply...i can relate...
i know all about feel'n useless... well anyways...nice drop...look'n foward to ya next one |
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07-05-02, 09:23 PM
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IP: 4427 437B
yo dat was really tight and i can relate to it. i was really feelin it. keep it up. one
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07-06-02, 10:05 AM
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IP: F8DE F595
nice piece...strong emotions...raw....very well depicted...keep yo head up...respect....
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