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10-11-04, 05:46 PM
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IP: 10C3 AE8A
What is original
Is it my rhythum or blues? Is it my courage or truth? Is it my acsent that you use to define my originality or is it my personality It could be my personality but in life originality is what u want it 2 be! So what is it?
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10-14-04, 12:02 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
this could have been a lot better if it was longer and you added more vocabulary, it was short and to the point but you added personality twice, which kinda messed up the message, but i know you have it in you, so just dont be afraid to let lose....1,,just some friendly feedback...keep writing, and droppin gurl...1
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10-23-04, 05:02 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 3C7E 0C7E
dis wos ight i felt da vibe
keep dem comin hey drop a comment at my poems 2 : ) |
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