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View Poll Results: Reloaded vs. Surgical | |||
surgical | 5 | 100.00% | |
Reloaded | 0 | 0% | |
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10-21-04, 02:34 PM | #1 | |
just a rapper
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surgical vs Reloaded
IP: 596C 2677
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UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-24-04 at 02:34 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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10-21-04, 02:48 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 596C 2677
Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 02:48 PM.
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10-21-04, 03:04 PM | #3 | |
just a rapper
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IP: 596C 2677
i spit venomus fluid/
bitch you cant step to me so dont do it/ ill unload bullets into your chest if you fuck with me/ then lil nigga it will be time for your surgery/ this fucking battle is high stakes like you and Michael Jacksons sex tapes/ Remember that evey doctor and rapper makes mistakes/ This man mad cause my rhymes are dope/ lil bitch aint even got enough post to vote/ this niggas mother is my number one fan/ bitch should decline this battle while he still can/ |
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10-22-04, 08:24 AM | #4 | |
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IP: 677A 8674
surgical has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 08:24 AM.
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10-22-04, 08:51 AM | #5 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 243A F630
From the beginning you see this battle was mine
Cause u basic cable and im on showtime I steal your life like cars on Grand Theft Auto Take your breath and make it hard for you to swallow I'll have your body like the leaves in autum its falling You talk shit in the restroom but now your stalling Tired of your rap shit and your little terms Lysol need to spray your spit cause it filled with germs An when my punches hit its heavy like a rock hit u The devil inside of me will make jesus walk with you You need advice so u go to Staples to find out why your mouth is stuck They cant seem to understand you u like the Aflac duck U got to tommorow morning 2 spit shit Knowin all u gonna to do is copy, paste, and edit |
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10-22-04, 08:53 AM | #6 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 243A F630
uppin 4 votez................
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10-22-04, 08:54 AM | #7 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 243A F630
uppin................
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10-22-04, 11:32 AM | #8 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1617 F1D2
uppin..............
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10-22-04, 11:32 AM | #9 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1617 F1D2
uppin..........
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10-22-04, 02:39 PM | #10 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: D6F5 C7B0
uppin 4 votez......
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10-23-04, 02:10 PM | #11 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1617 F1D2
uppin,,,,,,,,,,
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10-23-04, 02:38 PM | #12 |
Get Cooked Hoe
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This was feedback posted for Reloaded
IP: 3240 794D
........................................just checkin
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10-25-04, 05:14 PM | #13 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 596C 2677
reloaded sucks just give me tha votez
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10-25-04, 05:32 PM | #14 | |
Phlogiston
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
Voted For: surgical
Emcee:Surgical Verse: From the beginning you see this battle was mine Cause u basic cable and im on showtime I steal your life like cars on Grand Theft Auto Take your breath and make it hard for you to swallow I'll have your body like the leaves in autum its falling You talk shit in the restroom but now your stalling Tired of your rap shit and your little terms Lysol need to spray your spit cause it filled with germs An when my punches hit its heavy like a rock hit u The devil inside of me will make jesus walk with you You need advice so u go to Staples to find out why your mouth is stuck They cant seem to understand you u like the Aflac duck U got to tommorow morning 2 spit shit Knowin all u gonna to do is copy, paste, and edit Comments: well overall i think that you took this...elevate more in all areas besides structure...you just had a better verse than he did. Marks: Wordplay - 0/10 Metas - 4/10 Vocabulary - 4/10 Structure - 4/10 Punches - 5/10 Opener - 5/10 Closer – 4/10 Personals – 5/10 Enjoyment – 4/10 Creativity - 4/10 Overall - 39/100 -----------39% Emcee:Reloaded Verse: i spit venomus fluid/ bitch you cant step to me so dont do it/ ill unload bullets into your chest if you fuck with me/ then lil nigga it will be time for your surgery/ this fucking battle is high stakes like you and Michael Jacksons sex tapes/ Remember that evey doctor and rapper makes mistakes/ This man mad cause my rhymes are dope/ lil bitch aint even got enough post to vote/ this niggas mother is my number one fan/ bitch should decline this battle while he still can/ Comments: well i think u lost this one because of your structure and..shit well you just loss thats all i can say...just elevate and go to the tutorial... Marks: Wordplay - 0/10 Metas - 3/10 Vocabulary - 2/10 Structure - 2/10 Punches - 3/10 Opener - 2/10 Closer – 2/10 Personals – 3/10 Enjoyment – 1/10 Creativity - 0/10 Overall - 18/100 ----------18% V/SURGICAL |
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10-25-04, 05:33 PM | #15 | |
Phlogiston
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
ayo return the favor aight...the battle is in the sig...much appreciated.
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